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Big Boob
Photo Information
Copyright: Akhtar Hassan Khan (kotaddu) (68)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-12
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-01-14 11:41
Viewed: 18291
Points: 3
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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 937 W: 120 N: 59] (269)
  • [2007-01-14 11:50]

I dont know what you actually want to show us here. Just a bob??? The photos has in my opinion no point or meaning. It is more just a explotation of teh woemns body. Who are you posting for. The gernal public or young boys full of hormons? I think thsi would be better of in the private collection.

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  • cknara Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 107 W: 3 N: 43] (529)
  • [2007-01-14 11:54]

Photo not in very good taste..More than Just focusing on this crudely..a artistic exploitation is welcomed most..

I have to agree with the rest.

Initially you're drawn towards the photo out of curiosity, but once you have a look at it... there's no real meaning, no message, the angle is boring, focus point is off, even the title is just... lame.

IMHO it's worth posting, though, since it's an excellent example of what to avoid. You learn a whole lot more by seeing one photo that just doesn't work, than by seeing 200 that do.

Strange, Akhtar ... what do you mean ?
The quality of the photo is not so good and it seems you only "focused" on this boob ...
Sylvie

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1843 W: 39 N: 465] (4828)
  • [2007-01-14 12:47]

Dear brother I wonder what could be more pathatic than the perspective of this image?

And I also doubt that such a scene is natural in the environment of Multan which considered to be the city of Sufis and saits. This is simply disappointing.

:-( I am sorry you shared it on TL!

I am sorry to see this photo in your gallery. Are you looking for points or a lot of views of your gallery??? If that is all then feel free to post tasteless photos such as this.... You will get lots of views but not much else.
I went and looked at your gallery before I posted my opinion here. You have potential as a photographer.. You have a couple of very strong photos. Photos that show strength and your ability.
This one shows nothing but immaturity and lack of taste, as well as poor photography skills.

If all this site was about was shooting shots of a woman's breast... We women have way more opportunity to photograph them (boobs)... We'd have an easier time of gaining what you seem to be after with this shot. So give it up and shoot something worth posting.
Dayna

Hi everyone, My comment is not about the photo at all, but about the tone of the language of the other members. Personally, I think there are many other ways to critique a photographer than the most members did in this case. Guys, keep it friendly Please;) Cheers;)

hi akhtar
Curiosity is a lot, and this photo sure does that, but I think the quality of the photo and the technical work is not that great here.
I don't think its wrong to post pictures of these subjects on tl, not at all, as long as the photo is good enough, and I know for sure you can do better than this!

I also agree with Jaffim ...

no offense taken :)
stefaan

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  • Sadaqat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 109 W: 2 N: 111] (809)
  • [2007-01-15 22:07]

Akhtar, You have disappointed the serious treklens community. Even if you want to capture revealing cloths / bodies, it has to be in good taste, something artisitic. First of all the title itself is really (sorry for my language) CHEAP. Then it seems you have picked up an image from the web as I doubt it is from around where you live, I actually doubt that you shot it. Please refrain from posting such meaningless pictures. Remember you represent your country here as this picture appears under the country name PAKISTAN.

This photo is rubbish.

Are you 15 years old?

Absolutely tasteless... I did not even want to waste my time writing anything here, but had to let you know this is garbage. Heck man.. grow up.

DAM

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