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LamLam...
Photo Information
Copyright: Cheng UL (ahdi86) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 2 N: 12] (168)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-27
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 350D, Sigma 18-200mm F/3.5-6.3 DC Digital OS
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/50 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-01-01 17:17
Viewed: 393
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Her name Lam Lam, My another studio shot, the same day with 'LeiLei' shot.

Another model,
another cute expression,
another presentation.

The lighting set up is same with LeiLei's setting.
I was trying to shot a Fashion Portrait, but it seems i failed to make it. But anyway i still like this shot, and willing to share with YOU.
So that i hope you're willing to share your comments to me too.

Thx for viewing and critiques,
Happy New Year 2008~~

Enjoy!

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To ngupta: Thxahdi86 1 01-01 22:11
To rewshearer: Thxahdi86 1 01-01 22:05
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  • Great 
  • ngupta (44)
  • [2008-01-01 21:04]
  • [+]

Very beautiful. I like the colors in dress and its design. The model is also very appealing. Thanks and happy new year.

  • Great 
  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 560 W: 2 N: 82] (2267)
  • [2008-01-01 23:06]

nice colorful image

Hi Cheng
Nice view shot and good lighting
Beautiful model and nice pose
Well done

Hi Cheng

The light doesn't really work so well here; it's basically too harsh and too much from one direction. Although it lights her chest and arms reasonably well, it is not doing a great job with her eyes, and they are the most important feature in a portrait.

Perhaps if the light was a little more to the front it would be better.

Sharpness, metering and colours are all excellent.

Finally, a suggestion - if you genuinely want comments from people, you might want to make regular critiques also. You'll find that you receive roughly as many critiques as you give.

Rew

Hi,

Very beautiful subject indeed. On the whole, I have to agree with Rew, though. I also think the composition is a little off - but not much, and maybe a little more colour and contrast would work well.

;D

A

Beautiful shot, agreed with Rew, for the light on the face.

Cheers,
Jamshaid

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