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Shanti


Shanti
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Copyright: yopie pangkey (yopiefranz) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 8 N: 240] (1641)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-03-26
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D70s, Nikkor 18-70mm 1:3.5-4.5G ED DX
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/45 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-11-20 7:42
Viewed: 262
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Light and shadow fill me,
to complete my world,
without a doubt.

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In studio with my friend, Shanti.
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Hello

Interesting idea with the hat, very good point of view, nice model and very good black and white effect.

Black and white contrast is well done managed.

best regards

Just a little bit more of her face... and the image would be soooo perfect!

Naa.. just splitting hairs Yopie. It's really a wonderful portrait and I love the B/W convertion.
Good work!

Cheers,
Anneke

Loving the mystery of the girl modelling in this image. B&W suits the subject well and the subtle lighting on the model highlights in all the right places. Nice work!!

Hi Yopie,

Wow, what a great portrait with strong emotions!
The sharpness and POV are nice with great play between light and shadow.

Well done and have a nice weekend.

best regards,
Paras

Hi Yopie,
Great choice of B & W.Sensual pose with beautiful tones, well framed against a undisturbed BG.
erwin...

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 1 N: 733] (3588)
  • [2009-11-20 11:03]

Hi Yopie,
Excellent portrait, the contrast is spot on, nice cropping. TFS
Bri

Nice work with the light and shadow here mate. B&W was a good choice. Frame is simple and strong. Possibly a slight conflict between the collar of her shirt and her lips, a change of POV or a lift of her chin would sort that one out. :)

Rew

Hello Yopie,
This is a very catchy pose, and you did a great job of choosing black and white. It is kind of provocative, but classy, and I really do like it. Great sharpness, good lighting and model.
TFS!

would like to see her eyes..
but its a very good portrait..

Hi Yopie...great studio shot...wonderful light and tones...nice work.

Roger

Boa noite Yopie
I must tell you that you make a point not showing in this oner the eyes. I read the comments and I feel everyone curious to see her in her eyes.You have a very interesting way to look and it is really good in light in all the work.
Congratulations yopie
My regards
teresat

A nice slightly different kind of studio shot with some good lighting which has been helped alonbg with the B&W conversion. I have to agree that there is a little conflict between her shirt collar and her lips, but otherwise a nice way to use light.

Hello, Yopie -
Excellent portrait, very mysterious and alluring. The hat covering the eyes gives a sense of mystique, the subtle lighting accentuates the shadows of chest through her open shirt. Excellent pose and expression with parted lips. Great atmosphere - excellent work.

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6121 W: 199 N: 3132] (12634)
  • [2009-11-21 4:35]

Ciao Yopie



Beautiful portrait in B & W
Classical and tasteful in the pose of your model!
Splendid light and presentation.
Very well done, TFS.

Have a nice weekend,

Sergio

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1641 W: 0 N: 3310] (25135)
  • [2009-11-21 9:40]

Hello,

quelle doucuer dans les tos, sueprbe, ce portrait est splendide, avec la position de la belle dame, ce châpeau qui lui cache une partie de l'iamge, quelle recherche, grandiose.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1482 W: 0 N: 1838] (14377)
  • [2009-11-21 10:51]

Fine taste and presentation Yopie,with good B&W and freming.

jan

Hello Yopie,

This is extremely good black and white portrait.
I like the mysteriousness and what not to see the eyes of a girl.
Great light tones.

BRAVO!

Best regards,
Tatjana

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  • brubar Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 159 W: 43 N: 0] (1184)
  • [2010-02-22 21:19]

Ciao yopie,

light very beautiful, shot good one, B&W pleasant.

TFS
Saluti dall'Italia
bruno

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