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Pertals
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Copyright: ROBERTO INTILE (rintile) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1071 W: 66 N: 2375] (13440)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-02
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-03 5:45
Viewed: 161
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I've often wondered if there's
Ever been a perfect family
I've always longed for undividedness
And sought stability

A flower taught me how to pray
But as I grew, that flower changed
She started flailing in the wind
Like golden petals scattering

CHORUS 1:
And I miss you dandelion
And even love you
And I wish there was a way
For me to trust you
But it hurts me every time
I try to touch you

But I miss you dandelion
And even love you

I gravitated towards a patriarch
So young predictably
I was resigned to spend my life
Within a maze of misery

A boy and girl befriended me
We're bonded through despondency
I stayed so long but finally
I fled to save my sanity

CHORUS 2:
And I miss you little sis and
Little brother
And I hope you realize
I'll always love you
And although you're struggling
You will recover
And I miss you little sis and
Little brother

So many I considered
Closest to me
Turned on a dime and sold me
Out dutifully
Although that knife was chipping
Away at me
They turned their eyes away and
Went home to sleep ...

CHORUS 3:
And I missed a lot of life
But I'll recover
Though I know you really like
To see me suffer
Still I wish that you and I'd
Forgive each other
'Cause I miss you, Valentine
And really loved you

I really loved you -
I tried so hard
But you drove me away
To preserve my sanity -

And I found the strength to break away
Fly...


Artist(Band):Mariah Carey
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Lovely detail :)

Regards Mark

Hello Roberto! Amazing composition, wonderful macro, nice light and colours, good exposure. Original shot. Well done!

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  • przem Silver Star Critiquer [C: 48 W: 0 N: 2] (338)
  • [2009-10-03 5:54]

hi Roberto,
beautiful picture, the excellent composition
regards
Przem

Hi Roberto,
A colourful macro and magnificient leafs of a rose..
Excellent creative work. I love it.tfs.
Dr.seyfettin Güner

Hi Roberto,

An unusual and interesting macro of the rose, with exceptional use of shallow DOF. The sharp aand colorful petals in the foregound yield nicely to the soft ones in the background.

Regards,
Werner

Hi Roberto,
What fantastic curly petals of this beautiful flower!
A fine demonstration of excellent shallow DOF!
Fabulous lighting and marvelous color tones!
I like the tight crop to let us admire profoundly this piece of natural art!
Great work, my friend!
Best regards,

Francis Xavier

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5773 W: 198 N: 2598] (10192)
  • [2009-10-03 6:38]

Ciao Roberto


An artistic composition with a great colour palette!
Wonderful lines and the delicate flower has
a fine feeling of depth...
Well done on the macro work with fine sharpness
in the details that should be sharp!

Greetings,

Sergio

Hi Roberto,
Wanderful and amazing picture,
great close-up well presented and composed.
Nicely done.
Michel

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 456 W: 103 N: 597] (2759)
  • [2009-10-03 8:39]

Hello Roberto
Its eye catching composition and unusual colors
Very narrow DOF for me :)

Good presentation

TFS
Cheers
JZM

Hola Roberto,
Me encanta esta imagen, es poco comun y creativa
la composicion, muy buen uso de la luz y posicion
de la camara, buen foco y profundidad de campo.

Muy buen trabajo,
Mario

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 572 W: 0 N: 1085] (5314)
  • [2009-10-03 11:48]

Ola Roberto,

Very nice this macro with an excellent presentation.
Excellent colors.
Have a nice weekend,
Adrian

Hello Roberto

The image here is spectacular. Great POV. Nice woek

Regards
Jimmy

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