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Dani


Dani
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Copyright: Gerardo Volio (gvolio) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 92 W: 21 N: 15] (596)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-17
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-11-29 13:20
Viewed: 492
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Levels, some eyes lighting and crop.
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  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 4 N: 59] (553)
  • [2008-11-29 13:40]

Wow, what a beauty! A different angle with eye contact would have certainly been better, but otherwise the technical execution is good. You should have tried to get her to pose for you. Nice light and skin tones, great skin.

Nice work. Good clean tones, sharp, with good colours and details. I'm not sure it was the best moment to capture her, but then again the expression tells a story - and you have composed it very well, with "look room" ahead of her face.
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  • thy Silver Star Critiquer [C: 15 W: 4 N: 1] (178)
  • [2008-11-29 23:14]

Beautiful.
Some more ofher photos?

THY

Excelente Gerardo, parece una foto de carátula de revista. Yo la ubiera recortado un poco abajo.
Muchos saludos, Rafa

Gorgeous shot, Gerardo. Love the crop and the bit of gold and turquoise in the bg looks nice with her purple dress. TFS

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