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Old car in old town


Old car in old town
Photo Information
Copyright: Orlando Hernandez Rubio (guajiro) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 11 W: 19 N: 0] (83)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-15
Categories: Transportation
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-01-11 15:23
Viewed: 774
Points: 10
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Nice old car and the background looks cool also. But a few pointers: Try to go for the maximum size of 800 pixels to present a nice big shot on the screen. And try to wotk a bit on the photo before posting. This one could have been sharpened a bit and especially the contrast needs working on. And of course a slightly different angle would have been more exciting.

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  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 980 W: 101 N: 2257] (11399)
  • [2007-01-11 15:31]
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Nice Orlando,
I like the way the sun shines off the backside of the car.
I'm a bit of a fan of these oldies....
cool one!

Cheers,
Anneke

Hi Orlando and welcome to TL. The post processing work will come as you become more involved. An excellent shot of the older vehicle and the whole composition reflects age. Well done and TFS,
David

Nice one. Looks very interesting Orlando. I did some workshop. Have a look please. Thanks and Regards!
J-23

This kind of photos works better in b&w or sepia tone; they match those times and minimize the distracting colors. Also you have to try some PP: sharpness, contrast, etc.

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  • Enric Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 55 N: 526] (5870)
  • [2007-01-19 13:51]
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El coche es genial y su aspecto polvoriento y antiguo se ajusta muy bien con el fondo decadente. Sin embargo, el ángulo y la composición son algo anodinos, demasiado de frente, y en la parte posterior del coche hay sobreexposición por el reflejo del sol.

Enric.

Very nice photo full of authenticity and nice pleasant background. TFS
Jean-Pierre

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