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Lolly is a friend of mine in Havana. She's a great person with a wonderful sense of humour. She has a very nice home with two rooms for rent. Her home is a penthouse suite with a beautiful view. I've stayed at her home many times over the past 5 years.
She always tells me that even though she's not young anymore she still has beautiful eyes. I agree with her and tell that she does indeed have beautiful eyes. |
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Hi Todd!
Very niced face, wonderful eyes. Good capture. Original portrait.
Cheers!
- linz
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Hello Todd
I love portfolio it is a collection of wonderful work... In this shot you managed to capture the personality of your friend. TFS Lindsay
Beautiful portrait of Lolly, and I love the use of B&W here.
Tracy
Hi there,
What captured my eye in this shot- the black and white tones, the striking details, and the crop because the crop is sort of short and to the point.
I do not do portraits at the excellent level, because I am still learning, but...
I feel that if you had more space to show of her shoulders, and a little less room of her hair that it would still give a great result. Or maybe even take a step back, or zoom out just a tad.
Also, in my opinion, the lighting is just a bit too bright.
Great details though.
Thank you for sharing!
Leanne
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