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Bottle...Let Go of My Hand!


Bottle...Let Go of My Hand!
Photo Information
Copyright: Patricia Banks (PachyBanks) (170)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-01
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): sweet SINS of our LIFE [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-01-23 11:28
Viewed: 974
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Oh! The New Year!....I was walking around the house trying to get some "drunk pictures" but I guess it was still too early -here in the Dominican Republic the heavy drinking is done after the stroke of midnite-, so my sister decided she was going to model for me....she was covered in confetti, streamers and joy and decided to have some champagne straight from the bottle to help with the "decadent" feeling I was looking for.... cropped and heavily saturated.....hope you enjoy it!
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To buzdovan: Thanks JurePachyBanks 1 01-24 10:08
To sebak: Thanks Sebastian!PachyBanks 1 01-23 11:46
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Great composition. Excellent colors. Don't know if you could bring down the overexposure on the arm a little. Very entertaining and rowdy. Feliz aņo a las dos. (Espero que evitaron la resca!) -Hugh

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  • sebak Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 135 W: 12 N: 25] (431)
  • [2007-01-23 11:34]
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Hi Patricia,

a very nice portrait. I like it, because it's different!
Unfortunately the picture is a little bit unsharp.
My tip:
- If you don't use a tripot, use one!
- Don't take portraits (if you want them colored) with flash


Well done

sebastian

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  • DAM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 513 W: 67 N: 268] (1110)
  • [2007-01-23 18:55]

Feliz Aņo... a party photo... she really looks like she is taking huge gulps out of the bottle. I found a bit of humour in your photo... drunk?... well a bit... I can see two bottles officer... HOW MANY CAN YOU SEE?... I can see two bottles. One on her hand and the other on the wall.. :)

DAM

Very high contrast and saturation. OK; Original.
Excellent POV.
The eyes are not ok.She should have looked at the bottle.
Nice try anyway.
Alfred

Yes it's enjoyable. She's a bit like Shakira. She is giving perfect drunk and horny look. Nice job!
Regards,
JD

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