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Camille Petoud


Camille Petoud
Photo Information
Copyright: franck petoud (snowscoot) (105)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-11
Categories: Friends/Family
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Kids from the World Part X [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-10-10 1:40
Viewed: 758
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Daughter under palm tree on the beautiful beach of Punta Cana.
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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1466 W: 23 N: 0] (11716)
  • [2007-10-10 1:49]

Lovely portrait...Lovely smail...
:-) tommorow

Hi Frank
Nice saturation and metering here is ok, although the portrait itself is poorly composed.
Why did you choose the landscape orientation? It has meant that you chopped her hands in half - whereas a portrait orientation would allow you to include her hands in the shot.
It's also not ideal to place your subject so centrally in the frame: portraits work better when they're off-centred.
I've made a workshop.
Rew

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  • gerus Silver Star Critiquer [C: 17 W: 0 N: 0] (381)
  • [2007-11-11 6:01]

Great picture-compo,soft colours,the focus over the face.Congratulations!
Best regards!
Geno

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