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The Family


The Family
Photo Information
Copyright: Sergio Cross (sergecross) (36)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-07-13
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: Dimage Z1
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-10-08 13:31
Viewed: 904
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The Family:

Hi new friends, this is my first picture i posted in treklens, you can see me too, in trekearth. I believe that this website like the other one, can help me to practice more my techniques of photography at everyday.

This is my passion and everyday after school i go outside to make better pictures.
I hope you like this one.
Thanks for all
Sergio Cross
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Hi Sergio,
A cute & funny capture for a start in TL! Welcome! Some may say you should compose this one differntly and give them some more space to walk into, but I think I like the way you did it here... I'm not so sure about B&W as medium, for two reasons: I imagine these are colourful creatures... besides, to me fun always happens in colour! Keep posting, TL is a nice place to spend some time!
Regards,
Pablo -

Hello Sergio !

Welcome to TL. I wish you will enjoy as much this site as me, in sharing photos, commments, critics, workshops , with fellow members.

On this one , I think the use of B&W is not helping much as it is difficult to see the little ones.
Perhaps you coud have lower your POV to have a better perspective too. Nice frame.

Looking forward discovering your works,
Cheers!
Robert

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  • Peeotr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 148 N: 322] (2307)
  • [2005-10-08 13:45]

Hi Sergio, welcome to TL!

this is a situation with a great potential. I think a photo with more shadows would be better. Especially the little ones are not well visible.

Welcome to TL!

This is a great moment, with the little ones walking in formation. The crop is a little too tight on the right and on the bottom, but it's still nice.

:)

Attila

good frame nicely watched furtively very nice picture
p.s welcome to TL
regard
lukasz

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