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Un dia muy soleado


Un dia muy soleado
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Copyright: Paty Trigueros (patytrigp) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 9] (247)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-30
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): The beautiful [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-09-01 14:41
Viewed: 1458
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
at first you enjoy the amount of sun you recieve when you sunbathe... but then you reach a point hwere you just can't take it anymore! Can you tell?
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  • Enric Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 55 N: 526] (5870)
  • [2006-09-01 15:09]

Original encuadre angulado, muy natural, aunque le has cortado un ojo a la pobre. En mi modesta opinión, habría mejorado notablemente la foto si la chica apareciera algo menos recostada...

Enric.

Is this a self-portrait Paty?
I like what you have tried to do, and it almost works - except the girl in the background is in sharper focus than your subject, and you have missed your main subject's right eye, which spoils the picture. :(
I commend your creativity though. Thanks for sharing
Rew

Dificil foto! pero interesante!.
Tal vez si hubieses tomado un poco de distancia se hubiera vosto toda la cara de la chica!.

Un saludo!

Mauro

Nice capture.
Bit provocative and exposed.

nice angle.

Tom

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2007-02-04 3:55]

If it is a self-portrait, I like it. The expression on the face explains the subject, even if a bit out of focus. If it is not a self-portrait, I still like the idea, but agree with Rew.
Nice body.
Salil

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2007-06-01 9:07]

An excellent expression has been captured in this picture. Blushed cheeks by the heat of sun are nicely depicting the warm, thus, nice perspective. Well done Paty.

Thanks for sharing this image.

This is beautiful... yes and sun bathing ain't very good for you... but seeing your beauty is good for us... ;)

Nicely done.

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