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Two lonely friends
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| Photo Information |
Copyright: Rodrigo Dada (rodrigodada)
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| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Black & White |
| Date Taken: 2005-07-28 |
| Exposure: f/7.1, 1/400 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop |
| Date Submitted: 2007-06-23 16:04 |
| Viewed: 849 |
| Points: 3 |
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Hello Rodrigo,
I like the mood of your photo, rendering very well the "friendship" between these two "lonely" friends. I just would have cropped a bit more the foreground, because it contains elements/nuances (roadside?) that I don't think are necessary (even a bit distracting). OK, the composition of your photo will not respect any more the rule of thirds, but I think a lower horizon will even enhance the feeling of space and loneliness... I'll try to post a WS to show you what I mean...
TFS & kind regards,
Erik
Hello Rodrigo! Very good picture. Great! Best regards from Poland!
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