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View from Above


View from Above
Photo Information
Copyright: Andrew Nim (nim713) (169)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-10
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 3, SIGMA 24-135 2.8/4.5, Kodak Tmax 400
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-01-22 17:19
Viewed: 1259
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken while looking down on the volcanic rock near the beach. All work done in the darkroom. 12 sec burn time.
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Has some interest in the bubbly rock but this one needs (for me) some more impact. At the very least, a litte extra contrast? At best, total distortion of the truth. I can do this to show you but can't post as a workshop for well over a week. If you'd like to see, please reply?

So be it. I will post on Jan 30.
I will have:
cropped - too much area to lock onto
Coloured - taken to sepia, saturated a few times, Changed Hue.
Different frame.
Diffused to more of an abstract.
This will now be a sunset with no sunset. and should have gone down well with certain members - nova, ckradolfer, and so on.
The best thing you can do to attract regular intelligent (often amusing) crit is to latch onto a 'group', rather than scatter any crits yourself. take a look at my latest, offer up a crit. Thereafter, I will visit you when you visit me. Every time without fail, even if I don't care for your posting - I will turn up. get the idea?

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