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• CAROL50 (2674)
• [2008-06-22 7:42]

Hi Eduina,
You have executed a basic procedure in photography : that of selective depth of field or as here selective focus ....or both actually !. Not bad but you could have lowered you F to 2.8 for max effect but it is a good beginning here , my idea would have been to aim and place your subject off center to the far right of your frame (for exemple---to where the boy behind her is located....)and show more 'full' faces in the new foreground ....Also tone down the brightly lit spots here and there in your comp ,
Keep it up ,
Carol

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• appalcarp (4129)
• [2008-06-22 13:53]

Hi Eduina, wonderful shot of the lady model. Perhaps not centering would have made a simple snap to a much better portrait. TFS

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• jone (18572)
• [2008-06-30 1:45]

Hi Eduina ;)))
Wonderful positive portrait and smile...TFS
Best regards,
J ;)