<< Previous Next >>

flowers in the sky


flowers in the sky
Photo Information
Copyright: Gisela Back (giba) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 66 N: 34] (327)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-16
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: Casio Exilim EX-Z500
Exposure: f/8.3, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-07-18 7:35
Viewed: 606
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
She came to me from outer space,
An angel with an angels face,
She came to see how this world would be
Even though I’ve seen her smile,
Her eyes have been sad for quite a while,
Her lips won’t speak,
Her secret she will keep

She came to me without a name,
An angel with an angels game,
She came to be like a dream to me
She would never say a word,
She sang her song just like a bird,
Her eyes could tell things we could not spell

[Angel:] I have seen a better place to be
I’ve seen a brighter light to see
I’ve seen the world that’s meant to be
I’ve heard an endless harmony
Cause I have been somewhere
In that blue sky of mine

I could read it in her face,
She’d like to find a better place
Where she belongs
She’s weak but there she’s strong
And one day I know that she will leave
One day I know she’ll disappear from me,
One day she will be free

[Angel:] I will find a better place to be
I’ll see a brighter light to see
I’ll see the word that’s meant to be
I’ll hear an endless harmony
Cause I will be somewhere
In that blue sky of mine

We will find a better place to be …


"Blue Sky Of Mine" by Papermoon
diem, juyona, Werewolf, jean11-3, Proframe has marked this note useful
Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To diem: thanksgiba 1 07-18 08:34
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

:) a very summery shot!
Lovely fluffy clouds...
Good sharpness and nice lines of the flower stalks :)
Excellent POV :)

Hello Gisela
Very good shot! I love perspective and flowers against sky! I think your picture is full of happiness. Excellent idea and thank for the note.
I have done workshop of your photo. I hope you don't mind, what do you think?
Kind regards :)
Karolina

  • Great 
  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2639 W: 1 N: 1262] (15433)
  • [2007-07-18 8:28]

Hola Gisela,
precioso pov,
colores y bella compo, saludos

I enjoy the naive mood and nature in harmony! Excellent lines over a blue sky!
Lucky to see a good compo of clouds to complete the mood too :)

Hi Gisela: I like the colours here and how they match, the vertical lines and the flowers make a super composition, I also like the POV ,smartly done .........Roman...:0)

  • Great 
  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2007-07-18 10:20]

Hi Gisela
I like the Alpflowers.
This is a very good composition in nice colour.
Gr Jos

Hello Gisela, a simple but very effective shot.
The colours and the sharp details are delightful.
It would make a nice window blind for when the days are gloomy and grey!
TFS, regards Jean.

Hello Gisela,
Thanks for the song and this wonderful image.
Very beautiful color contrast with the green, blue and yellow colors.
Love the viewing/shooting angle with the flowers and grassess, reaching at the sky, very much.
A real joy to look at.
Thanks for sharing.
Kindest regards,
Harry

Nice photo, good POV, however I'd like a higher angle; in lower right corner are some wires.

Hello Gisela.
Lovely 'spring' photo. Very well captured againds the blue sky.
I like your poem aswell.
Cheers from Jan

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF