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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Jenny Jenny (l12s) (9) |
| Genre: People |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2008-05-11 |
| Categories: Mood, Portrait |
| Details: Tripod: Yes |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2008-07-20 11:14 |
| Viewed: 178 |
| Points: 0 |
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nice portrait.
GOD BLESS.
LAITU
Hmm, not so hot here.
Film grain/noise for starters, the background is distracting, I would recommend not taking one right on a corner like this where you have two different light sources with different color balances. And the plant/thing is distracting. Also her expression is almost a bit angry.
You may want to refer to Rew Shearer for portraits, take a look at what he does and that he dosent use real super fancy equipment but gets amazing results!
Keep Trying :)
Blurred, figure too central and background distracts from the "model".
In your into you say "comments / critiques are very much appreciated". Understandable, but you would probably get more if you bothered to write some yourself.
Hi Jenny, I would suggest taking more of the left side off to her shoulder for thirds look. I would kick up the light a bit as there is a lot of noise here and then talk her through some expressions that might appear on her face. TFS