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Photo Information
Copyright: Jaroslav Mazin (may_B) (12)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-04-09
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/50 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-04-28 11:42
Viewed: 278
Points: 10
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Hi Jaroslav,

welcome to TL. Very interesting first post. It is original, imaginative and really good choice of B/W. The only thing that bothers me is the size of the photo - a bit bigger would be better.

Have a nice evening and good fun on TL,

Stasa

prywitanne Jaroslav!
vydatny, no ochen' malen'ki snimok, chesno govoria hochetsia bolshe, no ideaja super!molodets!=)
ALiaksandr

Welcome to TrekLens Jaroslav

This is an entertaining photo! It would be good to see a Photographer's Note, also.

A photographer's note gives viewers an idea of what you wanted to achieve, how you tried to achieve it, and will allow them to offer more helpful critiques.

Rew

Hello! This is a nice picture. Kind of scary to me! I like the black and white. Great Job :)
Leslie

With no notes, too small a picture, confusing at best I really must say that this is not a good first try. We don't have the time to guess what you are doing here. Notes would be nice.

Hey may B,
Ok as I do not take many photos of trees.. I would have to say this one is not the main subject in your photo? (notes are so nice on TL so we and sort of understand what you want us to see) k?
OK so I think the main subject is the child? did a little workshop hope ya don't mind

Bom dia jaroslav
I like the composition very much. The B/W is superb. Itīs was better to have a note and the size is not the good one. So you can improve those parts.
Thanks. wellcome
My regards
treresat

Hi,
Good shot. Shows imagination. Maybe if you played with the channels and blending in conversion (if originally colour) then the eye might have come out just a bit clearer, but a minor point. One of the rare ones that doesn't really need a note....it's all in the superb title. Thanks,
Dougie.

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