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Inna


Inna
Photo Information
Copyright: Aleksei Kolesnikov (kolesn) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 89 W: 9 N: 33] (1012)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-25
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/8 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-26 6:17
Viewed: 1262
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Experimenting with light sources has led us to a simple step - holding a lamp in hands.
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hi
good light nice work naturaals

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  • paulw Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 3 N: 5] (64)
  • [2006-01-26 6:47]

Nice use of the light source in the photo with your subject. Very interesting photo.

the object is providing light source for itself by holding a light:)..if the light was covering full her face it wud have been nicer.i think she is excited as u can see from the projection :)

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  • DAM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 513 W: 67 N: 268] (1110)
  • [2006-01-26 10:07]

A nice take, and approach. However the light fixture on her hand takes away and the attention is now directed towards it. On a portrait, all the attention should be focussed on the model. Good work, keep it up.

DAM

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  • GlenC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 142 W: 2 N: 99] (787)
  • [2006-01-26 20:32]

She has a wonderful look Aleksei... Very beautiful... Would have been better without the lighting but stll nice.

Glen

Good light, she is looking at the camera well and the detail in the jersey is lovely. Well done

You have created an atmopheric image here. I think it is very good. Your model has charisma too.
regards Beverely

Very good lighting, soft and natural portrait. Bravo!

Through the thumbnail, I thought I was looking at a Jedi holding a lightsaber =)

Anyway, good concept and as suggested, maybe trying a crop on the face would work better.

TFS

Andrew

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