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lonely benches
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Copyright: Aliaksandr Yafremau (Alfonso) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 427 W: 11 N: 351] (3135)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-02-22
Categories: Daily Life, Mood
Camera: Olympus SP-510 UZ
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-02-27 10:21
Viewed: 183
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
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And on our court yard
No, as before, bands of children.
There are no little girls of drawing "classics",
Skipping thoroughly.
No as is not present, for the whole world noble
Heroes-boys.
Here in impudent cars

Where they, grains of mills of a rumour
All of front doors?
On the Internet sit,
It - a present court yard for ever.
In it write, do not write
Words intaking "truths".
Unless, only will scold,
In the same way, as was then.

And on our court yard
Benches and people are lonely.
Counter rate float,
And all past, also is visible for ever …

Can, instead of a court yard, the house to construct,
Let it will not be empty?
Beside builds already
The monster-
(Same as we are a person).

Sergeev V.O.
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very nice shot

really like the composition

regards
Deepak

Zdravstvuj!
o4en' krasivaja rabota! m9gkie cveta! mne o4en' nravits9!molod4inka!))
CRY_STORm (Olia) ))))

ciao Aliaksandr..
good compo.. and precious poem.. nice idea and realise!
thanks
ciao Marco

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4764] (21697)
  • [2009-02-27 20:53]

Hi Aliaksandr...

Just lovely shot as always!
Nice winter picture and view.
Good lead-in line and nice poem.
Best regards,
George

hello Alik,

is the ice melting now? or? nice capture of the bench, my friend.. the streetlights at the back also interesting to look at.. well taken and presented to us..

have a wonderful weekend :)

regards, terry

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2009-02-28 2:51]

nice shot
good composition
good tones
well done

Ciao Aliaksandr, beautiful composition with lovely benches, great winter view, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4079)
  • [2009-03-01 2:51]

hi Aliaksandr
nice shot with good composition and perspective.
thanks for your nice comment on
"lighting the foliage".
best regards
David

Hi Aliaksandr,
Beautiful picture and presentation of this pubic bench, excellent POV. and details, good composition and colours, ..
Well done. all my compliments
Michel

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