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Guitar (?) Players 4


Guitar (?) Players 4
Photo Information
Copyright: Tomasz Maj (fotomek) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 182 W: 23 N: 59] (751)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-08
Categories: Daily Life, Event, Action, Mood, Portrait
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-07-13 1:13
Viewed: 445
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
among photos of these 2 street performers (originally ca. 50, selected for TL just 6), this is one of my favorites; PP - similar as before (crop, resize, slight adjustment of sharpness, gamma correct, in this case also a frame)

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To rewshearer: thanks for WS..fotomek 1 07-13 04:28
To rewshearer: right,fotomek 1 07-13 03:07
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Good sharpness and focus here Tom, on the guy on the left. Excellent use of the shallow depth of field, a nice capture of his concentration here. Although he's placed in the correct part of the frame to observe rule-of-thirds, the composition is a little uncertain. There is the 'main' performer, but one of his hands and the bulk of the guitar has been omitted: then there is the second performer who features as a kind of cameo in the top-right corner.
I have a feeling you tried to get both in one shot, and sacrificed some of the desirable elements to do it.
My recommendation for this shot would be a closer crop on the guy to the left, his expression and concentration are worth celebrating in a photo all by itself!
TFS
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