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Copyright: Erik Sven (ErikSven) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 774 W: 114 N: 362] (2299)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-10
Categories: Transportation, Event, Decisive Moment, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ8
Exposure: f/3.3, 1/20 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Friday theme 2009/02/06 Transportation [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-02-06 10:46
Viewed: 448
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
[Photo Info: slight crop on the left side, resized and sharpened for TL]

The young and promising singer-songwriter Annelies Tanghe (Iza), during a concert in Malines.
For other photos I took that evening: click here.
Thanks in advance for your critiques, comments and suggestions.
E.
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De jonge en beloftevolle singer-songwriter Annelies Tanghe (Iza), tijdens een concert in Mechelen.
Wil je nog andere foto’s zien die ik die avond trok, klik dan hier.
Bij voorbaat dank voor uw kritiek, commentaar en suggesties.
E.
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Jeune et talentueuse… La chanteuse Annelies Tanghe (Iza), lors d’un concert à Malines.
Si vous voulez voir d’autres photos que j’ai prises à cette occasion: cliquez ici.
Merci d’avance de vos critiques, commentaires et suggestions.
E.

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To janneman: "BUT" en "but" ;o)ErikSven 2 02-10 09:56
To mvdisco: NeatImageErikSven 1 02-10 00:53
To Dingo: "only 1/20"ErikSven 1 02-10 00:41
To rewshearer: Room for the songErikSven 1 02-09 04:58
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Beautiful live shot. Good portrait image. I am hearing a song.

Competent capture despite the slow shutter, and relatively low noise for a Lumix, which is good to see.

I like your preservation of negative space above her, most people would crop it more tightly but you seem to have allowed room for the song - or the abstract concept of it - to float upwards.

Rew

Prachtige foto Erik !
Compositie en kleuren zijn mooi.
Je brengt echt sfeer over.


Toch twee " buts "
( de technische kant )

De grotere : heb je " haar " door bv Neat Image gehaald ?
Je hebt nogal wat korrel op de achtergrond.
( grote crop gedaan ? )

De kleinere : 'k Zou die, OE, gitaarklem wat milderen.
Detail ga je er niet meer in krijgen, maar zachter wel.

Nu, ik " huiver " van zulke opdrachten : moeilijk.
'k Zie naar je foto-info en dan denk ik
" yep, o.a. dààrdoor "
:-)

TFS Erik en tot later
Jan

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2743 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2009-02-06 14:26]
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Luckily her pose seems to be quite tranquil too, Erik... otherwise at only 1/20 you wouldn't have been able to capture her sharply. I also like some of the other shots you took. As Jan said, the nouse is a bit too hard here, so a bit of neat image would probably improve the overall look. Although... in shots like these, some noise adds to the mood. Excellent colours in the entire shot, I think. Some burning on the clip, as Jan suggested, would make it a bit less disturbing.
Anyway, never mind: it's a great capture in these circumstances!
TFS

Bonsoir Erik,
Belle prise de vue en action de cette chanteuse,
Excellent cliché et composition,
J'aime bien ton éclairage intérieur qui donne un bel arrière-plant dans ton image, il y a un peu de Bruit dont j'ai fait un workshop pour en enlever un peu..Excellent cliché..
tous mes compliments
Michel

ciao Erik..
capture is perfect.. focused and with a good timing able to make us appreciate expression and details! many thanks also for the perfect note with links!!
ciao Marco

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  • angel Gold Star Critiquer [C: 69 W: 0 N: 7] (277)
  • [2009-02-07 5:03]

ciao!
I like very much your picture...especially the pov..and you captured a beautiful expression on her face...well done!
Regrads,
Angelo

L'arrière-plan donne beaucoup de présence et l'expression est bien captée au bon moment. Bien vu !
Amicalement
Jean

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3546 W: 737 N: 2382] (18950)
  • [2009-02-09 3:09]

Wonderfully captured and composed !

thanks,
v

Erik,

Mooi sfeerbeeld, haar concentratie goed weergegeven. Prachtige kleuren en dat klein beetje wit zijlicht op rechter schouder en op het haar heeft wat. De overbelichte klem kan wat verminderd worden.
Prachtig werk.
Vriendelijke groeten,
Geert

first impression:
wonderful harmony of the colours, warm and maching background perfectly chosen!

oh! i think i know what this is!
it simply is fall time leaf Erik!

Maya :o)

Hi Erik, Well cropped image of this singer in full flight. A lot of emotion in this photograph. Good work. TFS. Murray.

blurred and grainy background
badly cutted
too much up
nothing down
cutted hands
what more!??
about critique...nothing about photo only info about concert!
You can do better
Try again

Best regards CE

Vlatka

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