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A CHILD'S DREAM


A CHILD'S DREAM
Photo Information
Copyright: stefan dierickx (stefke) (8)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-11-24
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-07-09 14:41
Viewed: 195
Points: 4
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Welcome to TrekLens Stefan!

A sweet subject - she has a good presence in your photo. :)

An idea: composition is often better if the subject is not centred in the photo. In this case, if she was further to the left, with more empty space to the right, the photo would look better.

By the way - many TL members will not critique a photo without a Photographer's Note. A Note is friendly, polite, and it tells us about your intentions. A photo doesn't "speak for itself"!

Rew

Hey Stefan,

Welkom op TL.
Mooie pose van jullie fleur.
Technisch zou ik het echter anders hebben aangepakt. Zoals Rew al zei, fleur meer links op de foto en met een groter diafragmaopening trekken. Op die manier krijg je meer scherpte in haar gezicht maar worden de voeten en het decor meer flou.
Ook zou ik in een fotoprogramma wat meer contrast proberen te geven. Wit witter en donker donkerder.

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