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GAME OVER


GAME OVER
Photo Information
Copyright: Erik Sven (ErikSven) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 769 W: 114 N: 358] (2291)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-04
Categories: Daily Life, Artwork, Decisive Moment, Mood
Camera: Canon EOS 300
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-06-04 10:54
Viewed: 717
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Scanned negative (as usual!), iso 200, B&W conversion, cropped, brightness +7, contrast +12, sharpened (+15) after resizing for TL.

All critiques & comments are welcome!
E.
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Hi Erik,

i like the POV on this and the strewn toys, looks like they were abandoned in a hurry.
B&W works really well for this in my opinion.
Nice posting with good balance of lighting.
TFS
Colin

Hi Erik.
Interesting work. Nice composition, good POV and choose of B&W. This picture makes me wonder where is everyone gone. Great title as well.
TFS
Wojciech

  • Great 
  • ianua Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 68 W: 0 N: 39] (450)
  • [2007-06-04 11:13]
  • [+]

hello erik!
i like a lot the composition and the POV! also B&W fits very well in here! an expressive photo with a great power of suggestion!
well done! tfs!

love,
reea

very interesting composition in b/w erik :)
i like how that bike is topple over...nice mood captured here

koh

  • Great 
  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4065)
  • [2007-06-06 13:01]

very interesting shot Erik
great pov and composition
best regards
David

Dit vind ik een hele goeie !
Een speels-dreigende sfeer, echt speciaal.
Ook tonaliteit en lijnenspel zijn de moeite.

  • Great 
  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2205 W: 171 N: 0] (28352)
  • [2007-06-27 5:17]

Hi Erik ;)
nice angle and perspective...TFS
Regards,
J ;)

Salut Erik,
Ton titre est très bien trouvé et le cadrage très réussi.
La prise de vue à faible hauteur est également très appropriée.
à+
Fred

hi erik,
i like the title for this and nice pov, tfs chief. ;-)
your note is important too.

hehe ... I hadn't seen this one, and I like it. Great POV, textbook composition (that line from the lower left corner leading straight to the abandoned ride-on toy is sheer perfection) and a great job on the meetering. And a great title.
The decision to treat it in b&w brings attention to the individual toys and the pattern of the tiles, but also heightens the sense of abandonment.
Great work!
Rew

Erik,
j'aime beaucoup ce que représente cette photo, tous ces vélo, et surtout ce tricycle, plus ou moins abandonné, par terre.
En tous cas, beau cliché,
TFS
Charlène
ps: fonc pour les portraits en macro ca coûte rien d'essayer ;-)

All alone, deserted, and gone!

Salut Eric,
J'aime bien cette compo, elle parle !
Et avec le titre j'aurrai envie de mettre 3 points.
Well done.
Merci pour ton comment et ta sincérité.
Regards
Mick

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