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First studio works


First studio works
Photo Information
Copyright: eddy Temmerman (Oilsjtneir007) (174)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-01-31
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS300, Canon EF 28-90mm / f 4-5.6, Kodak b/w 100, HOYA UV 58mm
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/60 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-03-15 2:01
Viewed: 587
Points: 8
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My first attempt to studio works with my granddaughter.
The task must be in B/W but afterwards i put some colour in with the pink ball.
The frame comes automatically when you enlarge your photograph in a dark room with an enlarger.

Any comments or critiques are welcome.

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To CVTJan: studio equipmentOilsjtneir007 2 03-15 05:58
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Hello Eddy, very good try. What is your studio equipment? I like how she is involved in the action. Composition is very good and the reflections on that ball are great too, without reducing the attention on the girl. Yours, Jan

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  • [2006-03-15 9:30]

Nice work on the lighting. Her expression is great and overall this is a nice shot. I am not a fan of desaturation so for me the pink ball immediately draws the eye away from the child. I would like to see this in its original form. B

good high key portrait, see that a white bg is ALWAYS CLEAN!!! It is strong enough without the colour... still, good exercise, thanx, M, (*_*)

J'aime bien les regardes des cette petite fille.
Bien fait.

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