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lack of thought


lack of thought
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Copyright: jean De Loof (jpdeloof) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1392 W: 66 N: 665] (4828)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-16
Categories: Abstract
Camera: Konica Minolta Dynax 5D, Konica Minolta 75-300
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-09-17 10:02
Viewed: 550
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
I am in a forest of checkmates,
I try to come out
not obvious when mind is occupied
since lately it turns at a slower pace
I let get away the mouse
without caring me of final outcome.
Sometimes it does not end, more mice
Saffron is crossed(passed), a dawn serenade! smiled without tail
as fish without stops
I move away from my subject
it became a habit
but of what??? I spoke
I try unsuccessfully to reread the text,
nothing returns to me to mind
This can be
The photograph in as subject
(you know that before subjects greets the king)
a harbour, it is disposed in my manner,
they point out a boat definitely
flies and silhouette.
Flies?
But why? an idea of instant
It is terrible(awful) in what I think of
I remember it that seldom
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salut JP
c'est vrai qu'il faut deviner, mais bon tu as fait aussi dans l'original!!!! ma foi pourquoi pas, belles couleurs et cela me fais penser a un tableau de PICASSO
bien vu, il faut oser
edith

Bonjour Jean,
Je vois de tout, sans savoir quoi. Tantôt, je me sens à la mer, tantôt devant un mur orné de tags, tantôt, simplement, dans une lumière qui m'inonde de ses couleurs. Enfin, bref, en un mot comme en cent: ceci n'est pas une photo, comme le dirait l'autre. Ceci est une expérience...
Merci pour le partage & bien à toi,
Erik

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 955 W: 20 N: 1282] (7282)
  • [2007-09-17 18:17]

Once agai beautifully creative work. The line the color and details all create a wonderful feast for the eyes. Beautiful. TFS
Christan

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  • jmcl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 261 W: 4 N: 204] (656)
  • [2007-09-17 20:13]

Hi Jean,

This is great ... so many wonderful textures and evocative thoughts .. great palette ..

very nice.

take care,

John

On dirais que tu as trouvé une vieillerie et que tu en a fait de quoi de bien! Vieille planche? Peinture grafignes etc... Superposition de quelques ajouts et nous nageons en art abstrait Visage à babord ou a tribord... et même dabord.

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