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salut Bernard,
mon avis !!!
manque de zouhmmmm
(O_°)
Jean-Paul
- Attila
![Gold Star Critiquer [C: 380 W: 0 N: 0]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-n.gif)
(0) - [2006-01-29 15:39]
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Hi, Bernard!
My feeling is that I'd like to meet the person photographed here.
BUT that also means that I am interested in the subject and not the photograph, which is usually not a good sign photographically. I should be impressed by the photo (WOW) and then enjoy the subject and then appreciate the photo again. Here, I only appreciate the bum, I'm afraid. ;) Reason?
The outfit is obviously designed for the stage, where people sitting at some distance can see only the major contrasts, but not the seam of the stockings. With the closeup/zoom, you have intruded into the "meant to be invisible" zone.
This isn't a moral problem for me; it is a photographic problem.
(A) Did you want to show how women's clothes can look REALLY weird? Then a different crop would be necessary to focus on the seam and not on the bum.
(B) Or did you want to show a nice bum? That's OK with me again, but then the stockings look really off-putting on this shot, post another one... or more... ;)
That's my feeling... and I do like nice shots of nice bums... ;))
Noticed that the colorful part (good colors!) is out of focus? ;)
Sorry, no intention to pick on you, just my honest opinion. You have asked for it. ;)
Attila
- dorien
![Silver Star Critiquer [C: 45 W: 2 N: 7]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-n-n.gif)
(117) - [2006-01-30 6:52]
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My feeling: Well I like your question here! It is a question I didnt expect! I like unexpectet things:)
The womans is beautiful, she looks perfect. But wel, nobody is perfect, and in this case the stockings show imperfection. Wich i really like!
It could be a tipical woman thing, that it is good to see even seemingly perfect people are also 'just' human and imperfection gives more karacter!
Thank you for sharing!
Dorien
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- logon
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 152 W: 10 N: 4]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-n.gif)
(1082) - [2006-03-02 12:55]
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Good photo!
I think to know this face.
Who is?
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 516 W: 74 N: 164]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif){kind=small}
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 134 W: 53 N: 47]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-s.gif)
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Hello Bernard,
Mon sentiment ? Bof... Je n'ai rien contre les photos sensuelles ou de charme, mais autant qu'elles soient esthétiques.
Ici, ton image manque de piqué. Mais surtout ce que je trouve particulièrement moche, c'est la couture de son collant qui déborde sur la fesse gauche...
Certes, cette photo a été réalisée pendant un défilé et tu pouvais difficilement demander au modèle de réajuster la chose, lol... mais au final, le résultat n'est pas top.
Bonne journée à toi ;o)
Martine