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Fenne


Fenne
Photo Information
Copyright: Willemien van Zutven (willie) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 8 N: 306] (3083)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-14
Categories: Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Sony Alpha DSLR 350
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Grandmothers Club [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-10-30 1:05
Viewed: 316
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is Fenne, a sweet little girl.
On a fam. weekend i saw her playing.
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very nice shot and good light

like the composition and expression on the face

regards
Deepak

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1438 W: 22 N: 0] (11554)
  • [2008-10-30 1:07]

Hi Willemien...
Beautiful shot...
Beautiful portrait of lovely little girl...
Nice colors, texture, composition...
Regards...
Andro

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  • Margy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 111 W: 6 N: 227] (2512)
  • [2008-10-30 1:52]
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Hoi Willemien,

Ja mooi, ze droomt inderdaad een beetje stilletjes weg.
Mooie kleuren in de foto en goed scherp.
Ze is mooi neergezet aan de rechterkant. Je moet Fenne tegenwoordig ongemerkt fotograferen want anders gaat ze "poseren" of gekke gezichten trekken, is de leeftijd dat komt wel weer goed. TFS!!

Groetjes, Marga

Hello Willie
You have caught her at just the right second. She is very pretty, but I like how you have captured the look in her eyes as she is looking through the window.
Well done
Janice

yes, she is sweet indeed and you nicely captured her lovely pose here. from her look, seems like she is welcoming someone. a great angle of lighting for a nice shadow. well done, Willie.

TFS
regards
Agoes

Classical portrait photography. High class creative work. Very beautiful windows with soft light. Cute and beautiful persnality. i love it.

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 663 W: 11 N: 1718] (6837)
  • [2008-10-30 2:56]
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This really caught my eye Willie. The quality of the image and play of light on it. Perfect composition and the look you have captured in her beautiful eyes, is just awesome. I am afraid I do not know enough about portrait shots to give you any tips, but my guess is you don’t need one on this image. Well done.
Warm Regards
Wanda

Merhaba Willemien,çok başarılı birkare,bakış boşluğu,kadrajı ve ışığı çok güzel,ellerine sağlık :)

HI Willemien..great shot..wonderfully composed..nice details...great light.

Roger

Mooi van belichting, kleuren en spontane compositie.
Achtergrond ook mooi wazig
Fenne staat er goed op !

Eén " but " : Toch proberen van POV en camera zo te houden
dat je horizontale lijnen zo horizontaal mogelijk lopen.
Dat is experimenteren, maar hier moet je het inderdaad hebben van " klik, ik heb je "

TFS Willemien
Jan

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2008-11-04 4:28]
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Hallo Willemien
Een mooi vlakverdeling in een mooie kleur en een mooi meisje.
Gr Jos

Hello Willemien
Simply a beautiful portrait of the little girl. Your management of the lighting/contrast is spot on. Beautifully clear and sharp focus. Composition by placing her in the right third is masterful. WOW!!!!

Dan

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