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Critiques [Translate]
- manujmehta
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1163 W: 80 N: 2819]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
(11900) - [2009-08-01 10:34]
hello Erik
wonderful shot
nice shadow with fine composition
good idea of croping and nice colours
wonderful idea of inclusions of hair, leg and skirt
good work
regards
Manuj Mehta
C'est très, très magnifique, Eric. J'adore la manière l'histore se continue dans l'ombre :)
Bien joué,
Rieke
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- daisydaisy
(9034)
- [2009-08-01 11:52]
C'est superbe. Juste l'essentiel.
J'aime bien le titre évoquant une belle histoire et le pov aussi, judicieux.
C'est très beau.
Je ne sais pas si cela t'aidera, je ne pense pas, mais je n'allais pas écrire une thèse non plus.
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- rewshearer
(20771)
- [2009-08-01 12:22]
I like the way this tells a story with a touch of enigma and intrigue. Mostly shadow, a little subject, and an invitation for the viewer to use imagination - which, in my opinion, is the most powerful tool the photographer can use.
I know it's being picky but perhaps clone out those oil/gum spots in the middle of her shadow to keep it more even?
Rew
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- bc_the_path
![Silver Star Critiquer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 1]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-n-n.gif)
(87) - [2009-08-01 12:24]
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I loved this one; a most unusual view.
It is a pity you only have a small file to play with.
My only suggestion to further improve this already good photo would be to clone out her hair and convert the remaining image into a B&W.
My best wishes...
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- tnahari
(9943)
- [2009-08-01 12:41]
Hi Erik
beautiful and original image.
great use of the shadow to create a marvelous scene.
well captured and presented.
IMO the small size of the shot didn't harm the good quality of the presentation.
compliments
tsilla
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- flashpoint
(9680)
- [2009-08-01 12:49]
hello Erik!
good cutting and interpretation
compliments sERGIO
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- fransx
(7848)
- [2009-08-01 13:41]
Hi Erik,
A wonderful composition of the dancer and its shadow!
Excellent lighting and focusing and above all an artistic crop!
Good portion of the dancer and a great shadow!
A clean presentation in an adequate frame.
Well done,
Francis Xavier
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- GreenBaron
(48768)
- [2009-08-02 3:47]
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Hi Erik,
A superb image showing excellent photographic skills. The shadow of the dancer is perfect captured and the small inclusion of the "real" dancer makes it an interesting picture which keeps asking me for more attention every time I'm looking at the photo. Striking is her hanging blond hair just visible. Excellent presentation in the white frame too. Great posting Erik!
Hans
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- korbee
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1368 W: 0 N: 1670]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-g.gif)
(13539) - [2009-08-02 3:52]
Vey good idea of composing and col framing erik,the shadow of the girl looks unoque .
jan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 155 W: 8 N: 28]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-s.gif){kind=small}
Point de vue original, superbe graphiquement, moment bien saisi. C'est un format 4/3? J'aurais bien aimé que tu puisses cadrer carré là-dessus. Si j'avais à modifier une seule chose, peut-être que je ferais disparaître les cheveux en haut à gauche, qui ajoutent une touche de chaos dans toute des formes si bien ordonnées. Malgré tout, une image que j'adore!
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- urs0114
(4557)
- [2009-08-02 8:33]
Salut Erik.
Un beau coup d’œil avec l’effet de cette ombre de la petite danseuse.
Une bonne exposition à donne un contraste parfait.
Superbe image artistique.
Bonne journée.
Urs
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- roges
(4593)
- [2009-08-02 22:10]
Hi Erik,
Very interesting and beautiful this picture.
Exceptional done and played, congratulations.
Have a nice week,
Adrian
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- jonathanhart
(15791)
- [2009-08-03 0:44]
ça me rappelle les photos que j'ai fait à Skagen au Danemark; 80% de photos en petit format, les erreurs de réglages, on s'en mord les doigts et il n'y a pas grand chose à en tirer
avec cette taille et sur écran, cela passe encore,
qu'est-ce qu'elle est intéressante cette ombre !
jc
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- hifimusicdai
(5169)
- [2009-08-03 15:34]
Nice composition with the shadow telling the story and maintaining anonymity It would be interesting to see the model ie a little girl or an older one tFS
warm regards
David
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- Reflex
(3084)
- [2009-08-04 8:49]
Une très belle évocation de la légèreté, voire de l'insouciance. L'ombre est complète parce que le modèle, partiel, laisse suffisamment imaginer comment elle est produite. Montrer en suggérant, ça c'est top !
Amicalement
Jean
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- Sharpshooter
(6920)
- [2009-08-07 1:30]
Hi Erik,
I really like the simplicity of this photo, such a clever and original idea. Good decision with the partial inclusion of the young girl, her shadow looks flawless. Good use of the mid-day light, this has worked really well.
TFS,
Scott.
- pozaru
(18990)
- [2009-08-11 3:58]
This is perfect !
I'm speechless ...
congrats,
v
- CMJC
(713)
- [2009-08-12 6:24]
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- gunershot
(20158)
- [2009-08-12 9:28]
Hi Erik,
Wonderful creative shot...
Nice colours and details.
Good focus and clarity.tfs
Dr.Seyfettin Güner
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- ciore
(2305)
- [2009-08-14 0:07]
well, keep on dancing!
the result is fantastic.
v/.
Prachtig werk Erik !
" But " zou wel etwas PS-opruimen ( 2 spots in schaduw, streepje om 13u, stip om 14u30 )
Inderdaad je heb last van ruis.
Verbeteracties ? Ik weet dat er speciale " blow up" software bestaat
maar ken de naam niet meer.
Denk dat je hier beter B/W werkt om de kleurruis te vermijden ?
Groetjes
Jan
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- SylvainMichel
(1112)
- [2009-08-26 2:27]
Bonjour Erik
Cadrage très original qui donne une belle composition
Amicalement
Sylvain
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- S-moon
(2279)
- [2009-09-11 13:11]
Hi Erik,
Many points for originality. Great capture!
Very well done!
TFS Greetings Simone
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- sothy81
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 96 W: 13 N: 63]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-g.gif)
(653) - [2009-09-28 20:32]
Erik, this is a very good photo. Very abstract and very artistic. This is how a photograph should look like. Very talented to use the shadow of the little girl. Very nice.
PS: THanks for your constructive comment on my photo of the girl with wristwatch.
Greeting from Cambodia
Sothy
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- ChuFer
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 139 W: 15 N: 0]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-n.gif)
(2326) - [2009-09-29 12:56]
Genial idea,,,no se ve pero se sugiere...saludos
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- nasokoun
![Gold Star Critiquer [C: 91 W: 0 N: 5]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-n.gif)
(58) - [2009-09-30 7:31]
hello Erik
very beautiful thought very good output!
TFS thanks for sharing
Nasos
A nicely whimsical image, with the enthusiasm and delight of dance well depicted in this captivating POV. The shadow tells the viewer the full story, while the cause of the shadow provides humor and mystery about who is really there. I'm not sure about the composition in the upper left corner of the shot...perhaps not enough of her head showing to quite make sense...but then the more I look the less I am bothered by it. That must be a good thing:))) Clever, artistic, good idea and results!
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- mayurb
(105)
- [2009-10-23 2:56]
hi Eric,
beautiful shot. her shadow tells you half of the story but rest is on to the viewer to imagine. i loved the bright colours. i think adding her hair added a funny touch to your story. thank you for sharing.
regards,
Mayur
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- ed_galagan
(2321)
- [2009-11-06 10:37]
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Hi Eric!
This is really Great work! And this is my favourite from yours! Absolutely perfect idea and it's realization!
Thank you for nice mood!
Edward
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ça doit être génial un temps de stage 100% consacré à la photo!
sur la taille du fichier je ne te serais d'aucun secours, sur la composition de l'image je suis simplement en admiration! et en prime un titre poétique ☺