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Make way...


Make way...
Photo Information
Copyright: Per Hoj (hojper) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 687 W: 111 N: 847] (4087)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-10-20
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Casio EX-Z4
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/1600 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-10-22 17:47
Viewed: 596
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Make way for more concrete and steel. Where cities are not disappearing in garbage heaps and slums they are disappearing behind glass and chrome that is being piled up at a speed that takes your breath away. I am slightly saddened to walk city streets looking for the odd architectural remnant of earlier days, and being met with the sight of cranes as far as the eye reaches.
This was a color photo, corrected for barrel distortion, cropped, resized and transformed to grayscale before adding extra contrast. I tried to add extra noise to bring out the gloom but decided against it. It's gloomy enough as it is I hope.

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nice idea to shoot this, you're right in what you say in the note.
but the composition could be better i think.but you used the buildings well for the framing.
b&w is k to here.

J'aime bien cette photo. Mais dans ce cas le nom respect de la loi des 3/4 a mon avis n'avantage pas le cadrage.
Le NB lui va super bien et le ciel est superbe.
Bonne continuation.

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