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it was a monday morning


it was a monday morning
Photo Information
Copyright: kurt sesselle (torr) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 50 N: 80] (1735)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: NIKON D 70, 18-70 Nikkor DX
Exposure: f/8, 1/50 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-10-09 12:16
Viewed: 1013
Points: 44
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It was a monday morning.
I hope it reflects that feeling.


T
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Did took this for a contest but not enter it.
After it i think i shood.
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nice b&w, well done

more then a monday morning it seems (it's my feeling) a day before the big tempest....
but I like it very much the same...... ;-)))
Paolo

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2107 W: 92 N: 1854] (10273)
  • [2005-10-09 12:23]

Hello Torr,

It seems that monday morning are sad for you. This picture has a very dramatic mood and th use of B&W emphasize it. Or is it the sunrise that is ending the night a new new week will start, so instead of negative it should be positive? In any case great shot. TFS.
Luc

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1299 W: 2 N: 202] (15592)
  • [2005-10-09 12:27]
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ik hoop dat je het leven niet te donker ziet!! en ik die bijna geen randje durf te zetten !

beautiful mood in the shot Torr :)
i like the perspective in the shot, the lack of details actually adds to that

J'aime beaucoup l'ambiance que dégage cette image.
La composition est aussi bien conçue.
Personnellement j'aurais choisi un encadrement noir un peu moins large mais c'est un point de vue personnel.
Merci pour cette belle photo.
Stefan

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  • green Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 184 W: 90 N: 209] (2430)
  • [2005-10-09 12:57]

Indeed, I think you should have entered the contest. This is a very moody picture perfectly well composed. B&W wasn't option but mandatory for this type picture, good choice. Maybe the picture needs a bit of sharpening.
Well done anyway.

very moody, good tones, (*_*)

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  • frank Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 231 W: 16 N: 101] (764)
  • [2005-10-09 14:46]

Great movement, I like the way the ship is "disappearing" beyonnd the frame... - this and the diagonal compo make the photo so dynamic...
The other thing I notice is this mood... not a nice one... It's a world where you see man-made things - factory chimneys, a boat, but not man himself - the river is man-made but not natural, so all in all it seems a world hostile to nature and the natural ways of human beings...
Gosh - tomorrow is Monday morning! :o

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  • Carma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
  • [2005-10-09 15:48]

So dark and great scene. I really like the lines on the ship shineing in the dark and makeing this lighteing repetition. We don't need to speak about this composition becouse it is perfect. Rules:-)

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  • Gianp (754)
  • [2005-10-09 16:00]

Excellent use of B&W.Well done.

Its more like the end of the world. Well Mondays are like that. Nice and very moody. Black and white adds to the mood. Love these kind of photography.

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-09 18:00]

C'est beau comme une chanson d'Arno !!!
Proficiat, Mister Torr …
Antonio

I make me thing about some urban pictures from a couple of decades. Of cours it's not your style who look old :) I speak about the decorum! And i like it! Very nice! Good mood!

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2005-10-09 23:59]

Beautiful start in the Monday morning, well present mood! TFS

Wong

Great B&W. I like the composition and dark tones...
Tomasz

Hi Torr,
yeah, you should have tried this contest!!!
The photo is marvellous!!! So moody ... what a B&W … an excellent Monday morning feeling.
TFS
ili

I like the dark mood of this industrial looking world, and the lines in the sky. WOW!

What a strong B&W shot!!! Tells itself with perfect composition..
Elif

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  • bruno Silver Star Critiquer [C: 15 W: 0 N: 0] (18)
  • [2005-10-10 10:12]

very impressive composition Torr

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  • johnre (42)
  • [2009-01-03 14:48]

This capture has a lot of power. B&W works very well. The darkness of the photo, silhouette of the skyline and power of the barge slipping through the water. Nice job.

I looked through many of your other photos and they portray strong feelings as well.

this is a very strong shot. I like the dramatic atmosphere on this photo

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