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Copyright: Marleen xx (maleentjeh) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2219 W: 103 N: 1823] (14627)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-10-08
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Macro
Camera: Sony DSC F828 Cybershot
Exposure: f/2.5, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-10-15 13:56
Viewed: 438
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
All sorts of interesting things happening in nature right now...

Just a stroll in the local city park.

Any comments very welcome.

Thank you.

Marleen
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Marleen,

Very expressive, all cuddled up, nice shot! I like how structural it is, studs and beams and arches... I appreciate that you captured something that is not an obvious theme.

The pic tempts me to experiment with a tighter crop, but it would only be worthwhile with the original hi-res pic.

TFS! :)

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1412 W: 162 N: 743] (8642)
  • [2005-10-15 14:59]
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It's beautiful Marleen! So soft and tender ... and a great eye you've got to capture this in a local city park.
Congratulations!
Luci

hi Marleen,
great macro..very nice composition and detail..well done

Onur

We like this pic lots. Congratulations on a lovely picture.

Amazing plant you show us,I have not seen before like it,Marleen,wonderful thing!!!

Great used of DOF and excellent details and sharpness you reached,too,well worked and Thanks for posting it,
Best
M

Beautiful DOF and colours, Marleen. Very good picture!
Annelies

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  • samr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 44 N: 433] (3323)
  • [2005-10-15 17:00]
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What a bizzare looking .. thing ? .. the nice macro is sharp, clear and well exposed - and shallow DOF makes this alien stand out. Nicely done Marleen. .... Sam

That's quite a fascinating um... seedpod?... and a lovely shot. I'd expect it to spontaneously release and fire seeds everywhere!

Hi Marleen,
An amazing macro shot, where you take well use of the lighting to create interesting effects! Do I see what it is?? No way! And I don't mind... Maybe I'd do some cloning on the blown-outs on top, kind of distracting?
Regards,
Pablo -

Wow... it looks like a group hug :). So warm and cuddely in this time of year. Love this shot! Now I go and look for someone to cuddle :)

You are right: interesting time in nature. Through my just started photography-hobby it is as if I see it for the first time!
Wonderfull things happen and I'm part of it.
Your picture is such a secret of local changes, just walking by; it is happening.
It is again a sunny day; you inspired me to walk the dog armed with camera.
Huub

Very nice eye for detail you have.
Very good DOV

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  • wallie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 593 W: 0 N: 508] (2550)
  • [2005-10-16 11:23]

Very clear and nice sharp sjot. I like it.

Don

beautiful lighting. Simple shot but very pleasing. The green tones are very nice. The lighting is the star for me though. Great job. JP

Amazing shot Marleen.. I love the composition. Very well seen... :D.. Amazing DOF and the image is crisp,.. Nice and a well-suited frame... :D Thanks for sharing :D

Love,
Hima.

amazing - i love the dew highlighting the web that surrounds this...

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