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Copyright: Karolina Pokwicka (Matylda76) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 340 W: 75 N: 589] (6690)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-28
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-10-20 9:50
Viewed: 403
Points: 37
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
HELLO;
someting to remind me of beautiful place in my vacations - Mostar, old city.
WS - posterized, more sharpness and contrast, black frame

in workshop oryginal shot
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  • Great 
  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1312 W: 47 N: 2914] (16760)
  • [2008-10-20 9:57]

Witaj Karolciu:))))
Ale mi sie trafilo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jestem w galerii miedzy takimi wspanialymi dziewczynami!!! - cala przyjemnosc po mojej stronie i czuje sie bardzo zaszczycony takim doborowym towarzystwem.
Gdyby nie czerwien - to tylko i wylacznie o Grecji bym pomyslal. Ta praca ma w sobie jednak ta doze tesknoty, za tamtymi czasami - 3 lata w pieknej i cieplej Grecji.
Bardzo ladnie wyglada obrobka komputerowa, cudny kadr - tak wlasnie przedstawiaja sie ulice poludnia.
Gratuluje:) i caluski - Tomek

hej karolina,
this would be even better if it wasn't oversharpened.
the posterization would have been enough.
it is a nice pic, though.
Brian

Hej Karola
rzeczywiście piękna pocztówka, super wspomnienie, widzę, że pasuje Ci bardzo technika "posterowa", swietne, zywe kolory, brawo
Magda

  • Great 
  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2008-10-20 10:15]

Witaj Karolcia,
Wspanialy efekt tych interesujacych kamieniczek.Wspaniala paleta barw,ite cienie wspaniale harmonizuja sie w tej fotce.
Piekna praca.
Pozdrawiam.
Janusz

Hi Karolina,
Colourful buildings, nice pedestrian street, fine image! Good POV of the classic, historical buildings, great lights. I like its simple postcard style. TFS.
Friendly greetings,
Kristof

I would've liked to see this without the posterising effect, it seems it has created a lot of noise and unnecessary ghosting around the edges of everything.

The POV, comp and saturation are all great and it's a very eyecatching thumbnail.

Rew

U, dzisiaj Bośnia. Przez Bośnię to tylko kawałek przejeżdżałem jadąc do Dubrownika. Ciekawa architektura. Zdaje się, że to miasto było znacznie zniszczone w czasie bałkańskiej wojny.
Marek

Hi Karolina,
Very beautiful street shot vith great POV, colours and perspective.TFS.
Pozdrav,

hAyAti

i can understand a choice of high contrast, but there is too much saturation, and pixelisation in the sky, maybe due to the over-sharpening
BTW a lovely place :)
regards
jc

  • Great 
  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1255] (6932)
  • [2008-10-20 20:57]

Just beautiful, Karolina!
Such a traditional place, so well captured and presented to us. Lovely perspective and great stone work in vivid colors and great holiday mood
My compliments
Argiris

Hi, Karolina!

Interesting photo. Wondeful colours, excellent POV, good framing. I cannot decide it, that deliberately too sharpened - in this manner with an interesting effect, as if there would be a texture. Superb shot!

Ildiko

Siema Karolinko!
Przesliczne miejsce. Piekne kolorki. Fajowski POV. Dobre zdjeciucho.
3maj sie!

Hello Karolcia
wonderful shot
well worked dear friend
great and interesting effect perfect for this place
have a nice evening
ciao
Lucio

  • Great 
  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 814 W: 51 N: 1717] (11169)
  • [2008-10-21 5:29]

ciao karolina..bel effetto gli hai dato alla foto...complimenti per il pov..ottimo lavoro..soggetto interessante..grande composizione...
complimenti
lele

  • Great 
  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 553 W: 0 N: 1534] (8955)
  • [2008-10-21 10:06]

Witaj Karolinko! Piekna, uliczka z pieknymi, kolorowymi domami i ciekawymi sklepikami /widze obrazy/...urocze miejsce.
Napewno wakacje mialas wspaniale...troche Ci zazdroszcze.
Bardzo ladne, oryginalne zdjecie.
Serdecznie pozdrawiam.
Barbara

Czesc Karolina
Bardzo ciekawe miejce.
Kolorowa,przykuwajaca oko fotografia ale bede szczery,originalna fotka bardziej mi sie podoba :)
Pozdrawiam
Andrzej

It seems like a nice place to visit and relax.

But there's too much noise, seems like added too much sharpness was added onto the pavement, which blends too much with the side walls of the building on the right.

Tomek

Hello Karolina,

This is a lovely, colourful scene of a place that I would love to visit.
Like other critiquers, I would have preferred it unposterized as this has added noise.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

  • Great 
  • ChuFer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 139 W: 15 N: 0] (2330)
  • [2008-10-27 13:29]

Buena perspectiva ,buen color y buena composición.

  • Great 
  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1410 W: 275 N: 1955] (12042)
  • [2009-03-21 1:20]

Czesc Karolina.
Piekna praca i swietna kompozycja.
Kolorowe domki w dobrym swietle do tego ludzie jako skala do calosci.
Pozdraiwam
Kloss

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