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Where We Had Never Gone


Where We Had Never Gone
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Copyright: Aleksandar Matkovic (sasa) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 35 W: 13 N: 46] (510)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-06
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon PowerShot A85, Canon 5.4-16.2mm 1:2.8-4.8, Kingston CF 256MB
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-10-09 13:17
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Points: 16
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Where We Had Never Gone


I could use some help about this one... I thought to apply with this shot to a digital art festival in Serbia (ArtTech). This work is still in progress, so if you, treklensers, have any suggestions for this one, I would highly appreciate it!!! Please, say anything, you don’t need to give me any smiles, points, or whatever... just say what’s wrong here... and, a better title would be nice...


Thanks!


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RP

Now, I took some (most) of the suggestions that you gave me, and this is slightly modified version. Since I have round ten more days to post the shot to that contest, if someone dislikes anything on the shot, please let me know...

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To lion: nedam morrowindsasa 2 10-11 09:54
To Ilir: ps intervencijesasa 1 10-11 04:50
To appalcarp: thankssasa 2 10-10 18:33
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hello Aleksandar

Honestly...i like more the original...if you could do to the original what you did to the final version about the white spot on walker.In this final version looks better.On the original,i like the tones on the windows(up - left side),in this one,they dissapear.Hope i helped you.Good luck at the contest!

Best wishes,
Lucian

Excellent PP work it is really striking. Nice composition as well. No suggestions I like it as it is. I think if you do much more then you run the risk of ruining it. Good luck

amazing shot Aleksandar
i like it alot
it's so dreamy and mystic.....so fantasy
...it looks like paintings

well done
i like the PP
the color tint and tone are amazing

regards
fafa

Well done, Aleksandar. This is a great compo. The only suggestion I have is to have the man standing straight on the far left side and make the building there with the man standing alongside perpendicular. (Use your 'rotation' in the photoshop software). With this like it is, unless you are trying for that effect, he looks a little 'drunk.' Hope you win!

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  • lion Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 599 W: 66 N: 31] (5814)
  • [2006-10-10 7:25]
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Super ti je ova slika.
Josu si odlicno uklopio. Sigurno si duuuuugo obradjivao.
U bre ti u poslednje vreme samo stancujes....imas li ti zivot??
Nebo ti je exstra...
Pozzz
E da treba mi morovind...

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-10-10 18:55]
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The power of suggestion. You mentioned whether someone dislike something here and that set my mind on finding mistakes or smthng ...

Well, if I MUST point out something that I might find not entirely functional, well, the only thing would be the frame. The coloring, tones and moods of the scenere are dark enough, so the frame sets its over-the-top, as there is nothing lacking in the shot that can be replaced or underlined stronger through a big-fat-black frame.

Very inteligent combination of modern-outfitted young pedestrian, totally on the rock side, contrasting against the ruins and baroque-dark sky. I like that you kept a dark aura around the roofs, which can be either interpreted as dark sky or as smoke.

About window coloring. You decided to leave the bottom down one in red, which is in eye-line with the pedestrian, hence the eye shifts between the two. Maybe, as a w/s option you paint red the top one, as that would be in counter-ballance with the dramatic clouds?

Vidis, ti veoma dobro znas meru u kojoj vredi koristiti PS intervencije. Mada u velikoj meri obradjene, tvoji radovi ipak ne deluju vestacki ili usiljeno. Nekako ... potsecaju me na Moby muziku - old blues in new tunes.

A.

I have deep respect! Why not in sepia? That looks old.

uow...

it's very vert nice shot!!!

It's original...

thanks for shot

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