Rainy day

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• Briddl (934)
• [2009-06-03 9:02]
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Hi Ahmed,
an interesting shot with good graphical elements. I like the contrasts between black and white and the yellow umbrella a lot.
I wondered how this might look as an partly desaturated image. So I tried a workshop. I hope you don't mind me doing so.
Thanks for sharing. Kindest regards, Britta

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• lisapw1 (8300)
• [2009-06-03 18:10]

Hi Ahmed, The umbrella is a bit of sunshine in the rain! :) I like photos taken in the rain. If the umbrella were not the bright yellow, it would not have the same mood. The pattern on the street are interesting too.

:) Lisa

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• rewshearer (20678)
• [2009-06-03 19:00]

Interesting shot.

If you want to receive feedback on your photos, may I suggest -

a) a photographer's note to talk about your work

Your photo does not “speak for itself.” A photographer's note gives viewers an idea of what you wanted to achieve, how you tried to achieve it, and will allow them to offer more helpful critiques.

b) you also critique other people's photos.

Critiquing is a great exercise in both learning about photography, and making acquaintances with other photographers.

Rew

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• ddupre2 (2588)
• [2009-06-03 19:30]

que j'aime ces rencontres de couleurs et de lignes,

merci

cordialement

dd

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• Fortuna (18757)
• [2009-06-03 19:32]

Hello Ahmed,

Interesting shot.

I agree with Rew's critique.
Sergio