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Copyright: Gizmo Moroniko (Gizmo_Moroniko) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 6] (161)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-08-29
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-18 10:25
Viewed: 527
Points: 5
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It's a nice leg and interesting composition but the grain really is unflattering to me. Makes it look like she has hair stubble all over her body. I prefer a smooth look but still this is nice.

Me gusta el encuadre
pero te has pasado de grano :(
Saludos

it's a nice sort of feminine posture but I also have a grudge with thenise where it's not needed.

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-08-01 6:55]
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Znaci tvoja leva noga je seksipilnija od desne. Ne smeta mi zrnatost po kozi, jer slika i nije fokusirana na detalj, vec vise na celini. Nesto poput grafike tjela. Ipak, malo me smeta poklapanje tonova izmedju ramena / ruke i pozadine. Malo PS bi dalo popraviti taj sitni nedostatak.

Moram reci da dobro znas iskoristiti car misterije i dar majke prirode. Nesto poput slagalice ... cekam novi detalj mozaika.

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