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Big Playground


Big Playground
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Copyright: Carmela Zmiric (Carma) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04-30
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Friends/Family
Camera: Canon Powershot Pro 1
Exposure: f/8, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-05-01 6:48
Viewed: 930
Points: 10
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On the island Krk is beautiful place Baska with long beach, cristal clear blue water of Adriatic sea. Can you imagine better place for game, even now when you are grown? My daughter played there long time with sand and sea.

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A very happy scene with your daughter and the clear blue water. I like the corner composition. Very nice.

Hi dear !
Nice view of the seaside !! I like your choice to leave a big place to water and sand and not having centered your daughter in the frame ... you are right, this is a big playground.
An excellent shot !
Sylvie

Finally such a vivid photo! I like the colors of the coast an the sea, they almost form some kind of a national flag of unknown country. A place called "Hanannia"? :)))

Love the colors of girl's clothes, they are nice add to the photo. Too bad she's a little bit more to the left than I would place her (a very little), but it's great that you didn't place her in the center, like in some kind of a postcard or something.
Great job again!

bonjour Charmes. Très belle photo de plage avec de jolies couleurs.
Je vais être difficile pour la composition, la photo est un peu déséquilibrée, la jeune fille aurait du être un peu plus à droite pour rendre la photo plus forte.
Très belle réussite.
JP
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hello Charms.
Very beautiful photograph of beach with pretty colors.
I will be difficult for the composition, the photograph is unbalanced a little, the girl would have being to make a little on the right the photograph stronger.
Very beautiful success.
JP

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  • shel Silver Star Critiquer [C: 37 W: 0 N: 5] (178)
  • [2005-05-09 12:40]
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Kako si Carma? I see echoes of the photo of my daughter playing on the beach in Australia (which you have viewed thank you) within this one of your daughter. Worlds apart, but so similar :) Beautiful.
Sheldon

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