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Beauty


Beauty
Photo Information
Copyright: Carmela Zmiric (Carma) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-07-19
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon PowerShot A70
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): A Beautiful Child [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-12-20 6:24
Viewed: 793
Points: 16
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Little girl on the beach!
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Very good portrait Carma !
The tones of the sea correspod well with the cap, those of the stones with the skin. The reflected light is just perfect for the purpose.

Pretty portrait Carma! The composition is well chosen, and I like the haughty expression on her face!
Good work with the colors and lighting too.

Nice portrait of a happy childhood very different of what I saw in Moroccon desert if you remember, Carmela.
I like her expression and her look.
Congrats
Sylvie

Hi Carmela, this is a cute little lady. I like the composition and the colors.
Great work
bye alex

if my English is not correct it should be said then to me I will continue in French

good evening carmela.

beautiful portrait and beautiful colors, beautiful clearness too but I find that there is too much water to the top of its head.
to cross a little to the top of the hat would be well.
beautiful photograph

jp

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  • egerie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 643 W: 135 N: 266] (1968)
  • [2005-01-27 22:30]

Beautifu yong girl and you did a spendid phtography with excellent sharpness.
Gisèle

An all around wonderful shot Carmela. Realy love seeing a water background. Is the subject a relative of yours? Yes and the expression that you caught is priceless.

*Is interesting, here I am revisting my own Critique after some months and I find that I see this shot so differently, now I see the contrast between the great sharpness and clarity of the face and hat against the softness of the water. Most interesting.

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5421)
  • [2005-04-08 21:47]

That is a nicely done portrait taken under sunlight which sometimes is hard to get good results but you did a fine job!

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