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Copyright: Carmela Zmiric (Carma) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Canon Powershot Pro 1
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-08 15:19
Viewed: 897
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 40
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My daughter shineing
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  • Good 
  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2005-09-08 15:46]

Lovley high key colorfull potrait Carma. Wish perhaps we coudl see more of hr lovely face but i do love the playfull splash of colour. It goes so well with her youth.

Hi dear !
Your daughter is definitely a great model !!!
This is a very original way to make a portrait of this lovely little girl.
The light is on her, she is the centre of universe, indifferent to what is happening, how much used she is to be photographed.
A delicate portrait, dear, with very pleasant colours.
Great work.
Sylvie

  • Great 
  • Merel Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 9] (266)
  • [2005-09-08 16:46]

This is lovely.
Great lightning. I really like the flowers,
there really jumpin out.
Good work!
Merel.

wow a splendid high key!!!
your daughter is the great model and you´re the even greater photograph :))

  • Great 
  • philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 237 W: 26 N: 176] (1320)
  • [2005-09-08 17:22]

great picture, your daughter is very cute. i like the white background.

Philip

  • Great 
  • Soph Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 207 W: 0 N: 89] (726)
  • [2005-09-08 17:35]

Very Cool shot!
Although the white seems to hurt my eyes somewhat, it looks great against the bright colors. Your daughter looks so sweet =)
Thanks for sharing
Sophia

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2005-09-08 20:42]

Very interesting portrait of your daughter, Carmela. She is becoming quite a star on TL as your son has also been doing great portraits of her as well. She is quite a nice model. I like your POV on this one as well as the treatment as if she was floating in space. Well done!

Very nice high key portrait, Carmela! So different than what your son has produced lately, it looks like she has 2 personalities! Great composition and POV. Excellent!

  • Great 
  • mukesh Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 691 W: 102 N: 435] (4777)
  • [2005-09-09 1:47]
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Great POV and a very artistically composed picture. The high key is lending an ineresting paintlike effect to it with the colourful scarf making the whole thing look vibrant and vivacious.
Yes... and I love those cute braids. :-))
Thanks for sharing a beautiful picture Carmela
Mukesh

OK, you're into high keys these days :) I know your daughter is an angel but this is a bit too OE for my taste.
Still, the composition and her pose is great! Scarf on her head is very nice detail, as well as matching thin frame line.
Good job, regards.

Petko

hello charms.
Pretty well successful portrait technically, the body is well cut out white zone. As esthetic it is perfect and this scarf gives very well.
JP

You are good. Yes you are good. It’s fresh and nice

LOVELY, I start to like hi-key portraits!!! Thanks!
cheers
ToM

Very nice high key portrait. Love the scarf on her head which adds a good splash of colour.

Oh, look at her, she is a beauty! You chose such a good and original angle to show her cute profile and the doll-like eyelashes and lips. This is simply a little girl at her sweetest!
congr and regards to you and kisses for her!
Marija :)

Very nice portrait Carmela...I like the unusual POV you used...and the blue of her headdress (wrong English...to lazy to get my dictionary) makes it perfect. I wish that I could make portraits like you.
You know what...I ad you to my favorites so I can't miss a picture of you ;-)
Have a nice day and :-) tomorrow.

Jos

  • Great 
  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5423)
  • [2005-09-10 20:13]

This is a very beautiful photograph with very good after phot process. mind telling us how you did it?

Andre'

  • Great 
  • edie Gold Star Critiquer [C: 659 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-09-17 4:59]

Lovely portrait Carmela,brava.
Edie

I'll be back soon with a smile for you.

  • Great 
  • udijw Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 35 W: 3 N: 34] (295)
  • [2005-09-28 1:58]

Hi Carmela,
What a wonderful shot.
so happy. just a bit over for my taste, but i cann see the artistic call. the blue bandana is just what this shot needs to make it superb.
Friendly,
Udi.

  • Great 
  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2005-10-05 23:45]
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How come i miss this one! Very well captured Carmela!!! I like the compo + Lighting(good use of overexposed) + The frame (simple blue line... makes alot of different!) Very well done!

Wong

Lovely model and beautiful high contrast work. Love it!
Regards, Branislav

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