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What Is This?
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Copyright: Carmela Zmiric (Carma) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-02-19
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon Powershot Pro 1
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-02-22 6:06
Viewed: 552
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Girl in a sand wandering what is on her finger.
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To jpdeloof: :-)Carma 4 02-22 08:43
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I liked the texture of this photo!!!
Different angle gives some plus for this photo!!!
Congratulations!!!!

Hi Carmela, c'est beau ces photos prises sous cet angle. La texture du sable est bien rendue il y a un très beau contraste et la composition de l'image est agréable.
Maintenant une question ? C'était quoi ? :)
JP
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Hi Carmela, it is beautiful these photographs taken under this angle. The texture of sand is well returned there is a very beautiful contrast and the composition of the image is pleasant. Maintaining a question? It was what? :)
JP

Great shot Carmela, reminds of when I used to take pictures of my children, I stood on a chair to get a better view point. This shot has worked really well, the pink really stands out to emphasise the muted other colours. Your positioning of the girl in the shot is well conceived. Well done.

Peter

Hi Carmela !
I like the pov you chose here and the texture of the sand and the colours.
Is this little girl intending to become later an archeologist ?
And btw, what is on her finger ?
Maybe you already gave the answer to JP ?
Sylvie

Beautiful shot. I like it how you captured the texture of the sand. And the girl's red hat is a nice touch - like a red sun in the gray sky...

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1162 W: 419 N: 1111] (6780)
  • [2005-02-22 12:05]

The concept is good IMO , but the angle is less I think, Maybe if you could have here facial expression in the compositon ..it would be better Carmela...question of taste ?

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  • Mrgud Gold Star Critiquer [C: 127 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-03-03 2:08]

Hmmm...potencijalno vrhunska fotka. Ono sto mi fali je osjecaj prostora u ovoj kompoziciji. Bilo bi puno bolje da si mogla kadrirati s puno vise negativnog prostora oko nje i tako naglasila samocu, utonulost u misli, igru... Poslat cu ti jednu fotku u mail da vidis na sto ciljam otprilike... :))

Nice shot with beautiful accent on pink hat :))

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