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• delnaja (0)
• [2006-02-19 8:26]
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I like the light a lot here.... Very professionnal shot : ) Congrats!

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• tet (3625)
• [2006-02-19 8:35]

very nice portrait. beautiful model with a lovely smile!
good choice of bw.

tfs,
tet

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• Tintin (1982)
• [2006-02-19 9:01]
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Beautiful portrait of this beautiful young woman, Carmela. Beautiful light on her face and very beautiful pose of her looking over her shoulder like she is saying goodbye to a friend and saying "see you soon". Excellent!

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• hampshiregirl (983)
• [2006-02-19 9:04]

Hey Carmela, this is an incredibly beautiful portrait. I like its softness. Beautiful lightning and good shallow DOF. Best wishes!

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• c3101 (1246)
• [2006-02-19 12:45]

Lovely portrait Carmela ! Great contrast in the dark shadows and the nice white smile.
Good work !

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• Marie-Jose (1662)
• [2006-02-19 13:04]

Beautiful Carmela, Good portrait, good ligting and good expression.

Bravo!

See you on TL, Marie-José

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• ropetko (0)
• [2006-02-19 17:46]
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Dajana! I know her and she looks really beautiful here (she is no longer a blonde?!?). This is really a nice portrait and you did a good decent PP work on her skin and teeth (if I noticed that right), but I don't get tht black "spot" on the left?!? It's not a finger and vignetting should be done differently. My only suggestion is that she blends from black to white, but upper left corner should be a diagonal, not vertical black.
Still, this is a very good portrait, your recent "experiments" are really getting better and better, congratulations!
Pozdrav!
Petko

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• cloverstar (0)
• [2006-02-20 10:30]

Very good portrait of your friend Dajana. I like the light on her face. Well done. She has a lovely smile.

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• Dingo (11948)
• [2006-02-20 17:02]

I think you'll make a nice pair, Carma... a classy portrait of a model with a great natural 'flair'. With a model like this I might take up portrait photography myself ;o).
B&w works well here, I like the stunning sharpness you achieved. TFS. Looking forward for more!

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• jpdeloof (4828)
• [2006-02-23 5:51]

hello charmes
portrait not too bad, a little the style Carter. It is beautiful the black when it is photographed on black, but the difficulty is to be emphasized the black of clothing. For the teeth I think that they are seen a little too, the glance is attracted too much by these teeth.
jp

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• maratony (1445)
• [2006-03-12 8:37]

Hi Carma,
Beautiful portrait.

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• gavindya (66)
• [2007-09-12 18:32]

she's pretty and have a sweet smile.
nice POV and really good DOF.
tfs
Haldian