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Copyright: Valentina Vukadinovic (rudla) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 52 W: 0 N: 7] (2772)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-06-24
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Olympus E 500
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-25 0:54
Viewed: 214
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Self portrait.Boring day,bad wether,home alone...and so my face go down...
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Apart from the bordem of which you were suffering this B&W self portrait is excelleny.very nice use of light and shadows,good POV and good composition too.TFS

Fantastic Self Portrait, great POV and wonderful use of B&W with your stripey stockings.

Hi Valentina,
A play with light, shadows, lines and self-esteem!
A fabulous presentation in B&W with an adequate POV.
Great management of light casting excellent shadows and play with lines.
Wearing those stiped stockings was a clever idea to increase impact to the composition.
With regards to self-esteem, you're such a great model!
A nice presentation.
Good work,

Francis Xavier

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2211 W: 171 N: 0] (28378)
  • [2009-06-25 2:32]

..."ne daj se V." ;)))
Fotka je prava...model josh bolji...
Nazhalost kishni pozdravi iz Makedonije ;(((
J ;)

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 23 N: 1845] (11082)
  • [2009-06-25 11:52]

Hello Valentina,

Great B&W portrait of a beautiful model!
I like the stripes of the shadows on the floor and on your stockings.
Very good contrasts and composition.

TFS and greetings from Netherlands,
Adri

Nice idea, nice execution of it! Good lead-in from the lower corners and very innovative use of light. The stripes - stockings and wooden framework - are a great theme and create a real impact in this shot.
Rew

Valentina, far from a boring portrait! Well executed perspective with stripes and shadows combined. I wish I could be so bored! The B&W conversion works well here.

JoeGoff, Louisville, KY

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 0 N: 1644] (13402)
  • [2009-06-29 13:46]

Well Valentina..long time not see,I wish it was always bad weather,because than you have some good ideas,good combinaiton of composition and model ;]

jan

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