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Copyright: Carmela Zmiric (Carma) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-10-14
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon Powershot Pro 1
Exposure: f/6.2, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-10-18 4:17
Viewed: 706
Points: 38
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During the walk through old town of Sibenik.

In WS you can see original, colour version. I decided to show you booth of them. The B&W is more artistic, but colour is magic same as the feeling of ancient there. What do you think?

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 782 W: 3 N: 108] (2305)
  • [2005-10-18 4:25]
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Carmela!
what a wonderful Point of view
and
composition of old buildings
becomes more great !
love contrasts and shadows on the walls!
Love it..
TFS ;D

Viktorija
p.s.
i agree about beautiful coloures, but b&w more stronger version this time:D
regards

very good photo, carmela. very deep contrast and wonderful point of view.

Very, very, very good! A nice balance between different textures(blanket and stone), great upward POV and an excellent shadow behind the blanket. Plus I like the B&W more then the original. Gives a feeling of decay and poverty, really good.

I think the two pictures have very different mood... the coloured is a sort of magic sunny place, this seems a house in the black forrest of fairy tales....
between two good images I preffer this....
Paolo

Hi Carma!
You know me, I like the color version because texture and colors of the carpet blends very well with the background, almost like some frame. Still, this version ewokes different mood, a bit ancient but very "afternoon like". Excellent shot! POV is well chosen and those vertical lines creates great composition.
Well done, congratulations!

Pozdrav,
Petko

Very interesting image, thanks to the original POV and the dramatic atmosphere created by the BW conversion. Definitely bette rthan the colour version

great bw and perspective. i love the contrast :)
great job. regard, ewa

Hi dear !
Speedy is late ... :)
I love the pov you chose and the composition creating a very dramatic atmosphere, in a village. One can imagine a story behind these windows, some secrets. I feel like in Corsica, in some moutain villages.
Great work !
Sylvie
ps : I like both versions. The colour one is great too with warm tones. So 2 points for the B&W and 2 points for the colour one ... ;))

hi! great shot!
the picture has a lot of power. i like the tones and contrast! regards

beautiful b&w! I love the POV and composition. Great lighting and patterns as well. Perfect. JP

Sibenik is a very beautiful little town... I was going there with a ferry from Brac!
Nice shot Carmela, I like the B&W and the angle!! Both aspect makes it strong!
cheers
ToM

Bonjours Charmes, entre les deux je n'hésite pas , je choisis celle en couleur ouù l'on ressent un peu de paix, un endroit calme. La B&W est dure, tranchante comme un couteau. Je trouve deux personnes différentes dans ces deux photos.
Celle dans le WS est meilleure pour son atmosphère ... La B&W c'est un peu de désastre.


good day Charms, between the two I do not hesitate, I choose that color where one feels a little peace, a calm place. The B&W is hard, sharp like a knife. I find two people different in these two photographs. That in the WS is better for its atmosphere... The B&W it is a little disaster.
amitiés
jp

Hello Carmela... The wide angle creates impressive details in your composition; strong shadows make composition dramatic... Excellent...

Can

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  • edie Gold Star Critiquer [C: 659 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-18 13:35]

Impressive pov Carmela and pleasant old build,it tells so much human life.I preffer the b&W version.
Brava
Edie

That's beautifull Carmela! Wat a great catch! I like how it's nice and showing well the daily life details! It's full of great texture!

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  • Yogi Gold Star Critiquer [C: 92 W: 7 N: 33] (237)
  • [2005-10-21 16:11]

Both versions are great on its own way! Fantastic angle BTW!

Lijep pozdrav,
Marin

Wow!! This is an amazing image. full of differnt textures, excellent tones and great POV. Very nice indeed.

Good job Carmela!!!!!

Take care, Stefania :))

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  • Ejla Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 333 W: 13 N: 137] (2488)
  • [2006-02-12 4:29]
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jednog dana napravit ću temu pod nazivom "Laundry", a ova će biti među prvima!

Hi Carmela,
Very nice shot with an impressive pov, I like it very much.

Steph.

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