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Gymnastic 15


Gymnastic 15
Photo Information
Copyright: Jelena Popic (Ejla) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 333 W: 13 N: 137] (2488)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-29
Categories: Event
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Gymnastic [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-05-21 19:27
Viewed: 663
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The last one!

I see by less and less comments that I'm boring with this photos....so no more...
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Well done. I like the color, the POV and the content. Very well done.

Haha, great clothing, like the lighting as well, nicely done.

Great lighting, very nicely done. The facial expressions are funny, keep it up.

-Neil

These two certainly look like they've had enough. I like the outfits. Very cute.

Joe

  • Great 
  • DarkoG Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 257 W: 14 N: 88] (1014)
  • [2006-05-22 3:07]
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Bok Jelena

Njihova lica pokazuju sve.

Zgodna fotka.
Pozdrav Darko

Dobar dan Jelena!!!!

No , your not boring at all . But the coach seems to be boring however looking at their cute faces. You photo is bringing us smiles (^_^)
Well composed, and presented.
Keep on posting!
Robert

fotka je super, svaka cast.
pozdrav!
zoran

Is the right lass bored or tired :) Cute expressions.

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  • drymd29 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1447 W: 248 N: 654] (7621)
  • [2006-05-22 10:59]

Good; very good; close to the objects with nice expressions in cloth and faces.
Huub; not boring at all!

A nice way to finish your series, Ejla! The one on the left says "I want more", the other says "Maybe I've had enough..." Good snapshot, not an artistic picture, but one that shows you are very attentive to what's happening around you!

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  • niner Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 222 W: 11 N: 0] (2068)
  • [2006-05-22 18:02]

Hi Jelo,
this shot is great, full of interseting details and nice story behind /I'm bored, bring me my Barbie :))

tfs
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It's not that I'm being bored, I'm looking in awe, and enjoying every one of the photos. I love these two, they're tired, bored and young enough to feel free to show it.

I have a suggestion, a crop to remove some of the busy background would focus the image even more. I've done a workshop to show you what I mean. I hope you don't mind.
Regards,
Lois

excellente, cellec-i !
Marie

  • Great 
  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-05-25 16:25]

Another excellent one in the series, Jelena. On this one, I just wished the hand on the bar was not there but that is not easy to avoir. Nice expression on these two young girls...the day must have been a long one. Excellent!

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