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Damen Friseur
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Copyright: Jelena Popic (Ejla) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 333 W: 13 N: 137] (2488)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-06-21
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon 350 D, 28-135 f/3.5-5.6 Ø72
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-07-09 18:01
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Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My first day with new lenses. I just took it in the shoop and went to the hairdresser. I had to wait, and started playing with my camera. The girl was waiting her Mom.... I was waiting my turn...and took some photos of her.

Please check the colour version in the WS, and let me know your opinion!
Thanks!

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  • NAHL Gold Star Critiquer [C: 134 W: 0 N: 0] (1196)
  • [2006-07-09 18:26]

Hi Jelena
Great b&w shot.
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Mahdi

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  • btokaz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1060 W: 127 N: 167] (5744)
  • [2006-07-09 18:38]

Nice shot Jelena. So simple situation. I like it...
Tomasz

Beautiful expression on the little girl. So much in a world of her own. Like all little girls, I suppose, only you caught it really well. Great job

Nica

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3314 W: 789 N: 4432] (19950)
  • [2006-07-09 23:11]

Hi Jelena,
I prefer dthe B&W. I think that it is more appropriate for the thoughtful air of the small girl. I also like the composition with the hairdresser and you of foreground. Excellent image! Annie

Hi Jelena,
Lovely shot good choice of b & w,nicely composed.
Steph.

Great candid shot. The black and white is a good choice. Nice focus and framing.

Great daily life shot Jelena. It looks fab in B/W. I like this sort of news style photos. Well done.

B/W is better. good job!

Jadno djete...ja sam par put čekao curu....ufff kakva dosada i uzalud sve Glorije i Tene i šta ti ja znam Cosmo itd
Koji ti je to objektiv? Nebi rekao da je Canon. Muči me ovaj 72!

fotka je prekrasna, ali slazem se s josipom u vezi djeteta :-)
a da vidis kako zumira 70-300 :-)
pozdrav!
zoran

ps
ova mi je puno bolja

the color one is nice too Jelena :)
but i prefer the mood in this b/w version
it looks like the girl has got tired of waiting...and her mind is drifting to a different place :)

excellent work

X

Lovely portrait Jelena!

Oups Dobar Dan first my dear! Great choice to use the B&W. Indeed it is more appropriate with the sadness of the little girl. Mood is far more better with the B&W.

One minor thing, you should have moved slighly to your left for an optimum POV, to get her mother better in the mirror.
Excellent idea to keep them partly on the left edge of your photo.
Cheers!
Robert

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