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Bridge
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Copyright: Fernand Bos (Bos) (374)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Leica R5, 28 mm f/2.8
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-01-11 13:58
Viewed: 681
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Had a kind of similar shot here up before on hp5 but the slide film (fuji provia) i got a few days later made me choose for this shot so i dropped the other
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Nice use of perspective. The natural wood gives it a warm tone. I noticed a sort of (for lack of a better term) unbalanced feel to this & when I looked more closely, the geometry gave it away: count the panes of glass backwards from the closest 2 main support beams, there are 2.5 on the left side & only 2 on the right. Ordinarily I don't think I'd have noticed something like that, but the regular lines really made it stand out. I think you could improve this by cropping the left (or right) side to match the other, it would at least lend a "balanced" feel to it. Regards, Erik.

Hoi Fermand,
Mooie diepe kijk, als in een lange kooi, hangend in de lucht.
Ik weet niet of je met software werkt, maar je zou 'm kunnen snijden zodat de startpunten symmetrisch worden. JUstme123 vertelde het al.
Met een simpel frame sluit je de kooi af. Ik probeer het in een workshop.
Groet
Huub

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