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memories of Prague to Cristina


memories of Prague to Cristina
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Copyright: Teresat Teresat (Teresat) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 57 N: 2135] (8553)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-06-09
Categories: Mood
Camera: Panasonic FZ18
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): TEXAS EXCELLENCE AWARD III, JAPIEY'S FAVOURITES [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-06-18 17:58
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When I was still little (14th) I had the privilege of hear lots of poetry. At that time I've known my first Christina (with a h), an English poet with «roots» in Italy; her poem that impressed me was «Song», a very sad and full of feelings poem.

I am sure that in my childhood I would love to play with some girls I met here in TL as adult; one of them is Cris (papera) - yes, I know Cris, we must include our piccolina to have more fun!

Cris, this one is for you.
I know you are all right and that song will not make you sad.

Life is a great adventure and all begins when we are very young.

T.

"When I am dead, my dearest,
Sing no sad songs for me;
Plant thou no roses at my head,
Nor shady cypress tree:
Be the green grass above me
With showers and dewdrops wet;
And if thou wilt, remember,
And if thou wilt, forget.
I shall not see the shadows,
I shall not feel the rain;
I shall not hear the nightingale
Sing on, as if in pain:
And dreaming through the twilight
That doth not rise nor set,
Haply I may remember,
And haply may forget."

SONG by Christina Rossetti

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To boomcat: Hello terryTeresat 2 06-24 03:37
To papera: Boa noiteTeresat 1 06-19 16:07
To pozaru: Thanks VladTeresat 2 06-19 04:47
To manujmehta: many thanks ManujTeresat 1 06-19 03:44
To Redrubin: Bom dia lucioTeresat 1 06-19 03:42
To Urfaust: Thanks MarcoTeresat 1 06-19 03:38
To hay_kes: Hello my friend HayatiTeresat 1 06-19 03:30
To dareco: Many thanks KarenTeresat 1 06-19 03:28
To burak28: Bom dia B.OTeresat 1 06-19 03:27
To nicou: Merci NicolasTeresat 1 06-19 03:25
To tanburi: Thnnks SelahattinTeresat 1 06-19 03:23
To japiey: Hello my dear JeanTeresat 1 06-19 03:21
To shelbeesmom: Bom dia LindaTeresat 1 06-19 03:17
To piccolina: Bom dia my piccolinaTeresat 1 06-19 03:00
To harpya: Boa noite sergioTeresat 1 06-18 18:25
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Ciao Teresat,


Gosto do B&W aqui, eles correspondem muito bem ao assunto!
A cena está bem enquadrada com pino afiado nos detalhes ...
Dinamica nas linhas principais da composição, bom trabalho!
A garota me parece levemente triste e isolada!
Ou talvez, só observando.

Saudações,

Sergio

Wow!! Unreal photo Teresa! Just amazing...one of your best ever! The BW is perfect for this! Normally subjects don't face outwards but this works fabulously!! You get an award for this...
B-)
Linda

Hello Teresat,
Great artistic BW....
Well designed composition and light
I brerathless...
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1285 W: 0 N: 2535] (20568)
  • [2009-06-18 21:27]
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Hello,

Fantastique image quelle est belle cette jeune fielle tout en blanc, elle ressort comme un ange, avec la belle courbe du tobogang, sueprbe.

Braov et amitié

Nicou

Hi Teresa
What a wonderful capture and memory
Amazing atmosphere and note
Thanks for sharing
Burak

Hi Teresa,

My journey from the nostalgic moods to the realistic assessment of childhood dreams begins here...

Yesterday's noises turn todays golden dreams, isn't it, Teresa?

Looking back,the simplest THOUGHT we all will have is.. when does our life reach the golden days of childhood again? ......

This image has the power that inspires many..
This is a moment to think too..

Thank you for the thought.

jp

Bom dia my dear Teresa,

well, thanks for including me in the girl's play. :) I am more than happy to participate. :) Miss you guys terribly *I know, I know, I still have to write my e-mail to you, I am so slow and busy lately*

The thing that I like about poetry and photos the most is...they are like small time portals and when you look at them, read them, they take you on a certain place and time and you can experience certain emotions and memories over and over again. This image reminds me of my childhood (I was always that strange kid living in her own 'strange' world...I still am that kid sometimes and I love it, because it makes me complete).

Life is strange circle...we are born then we die, life is what happenes in between, if we are able to recognize it. Childhood can be the best part of our lives, time of innocence, when things are easy and world seems simple. Then we grow up and see the reality...nothing is easy. But the trick to survive in this life is to keep the child in you alive...sooner or later we all return to our childhood, because we have to, because it makes sense.

You are right...life is great adventure and we need the right people to share it with. I am happy to know you - my girls and to share the child in me with you.

Um grande abraço,

Stasa

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2009-06-18 23:01]
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A very lovely note to go along with this beautiful picture. The b&w helps to create a lovely mood. Good detail and contrast. TFS

Ola Teresat,
What a stunning B&W photo.Welll taken.TFS.
Um grande abraço,

hAyAti

ciao Teresa..
what a lovely mood you was able to create.. it's taken directly from the past.. and use of b&w increases this sensation of old looking! excellent with the poem.. beautiful pose and expression captured! great dedication..
my compliments
ciao Marco

PS i'm sure when we are adult.. we continue to play as we was in our childhood.. other lenguages.. other behaviours.. but the same attitude.. feelings! ;))

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3562 W: 737 N: 2400] (19048)
  • [2009-06-19 0:38]
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wow, that's an absolutely amazing atmosphere !
Almost unreal.


thanks a lot,
v

Brava Teresa
good choice for the black and white
good moment captured and perfect worked
have good week end
ciao
Lucio

hello teresat
how are you doing my friend?
another wonderful shot with fine conversions
nice effect you have applied on the frame
very good pov and nice subject
wonderful poem teresat, am out of words

regards
Manuj Mehta

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  • kanton Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 714 W: 5 N: 1280] (5334)
  • [2009-06-19 10:38]

Ola Teresat!
Wonderful and artistic B&W compo!
full of emotions and memories,
life is a great adventure indeed,
It's true, most things begin when
we are very young but we "shape"
them in the proccess.
All my copliments and tfs
Kostas

Prague ranks high on my list of places to go - and equally high on the list of places I never seem to find the time to visit...
then you go all the way to Prague and find this little girl for me =)
thank you for this beautiful photo and for the note - I know why you dedicated this girl to me =)
yes, all begins when we are very young. then we grow up and grow old, but what we were, we will be.
it's a poetic and lyrical image. it's the moment when we stop to think and look around and check if who we love is still there.
boa noite Teresa =)
c.

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1418 W: 275 N: 1967] (12108)
  • [2009-06-19 13:02]

Beautiful moment captured.
Simply and effective.
Great dedication with a good note.
Best Re gards.
Janek Kloss

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1630 W: 118 N: 2811] (11324)
  • [2009-06-19 17:02]

Hello T
The poetry of your look never stops to surprise me... what can I say?
A very poetic, nosthlgic and very beautiful image. Excellent note. Congrats, mb

Lovely shot Teresa. The angle of the slide as it curves through the shot, the beautiful little girl sitting with a contented look on her face. ... beautiful tones throughout. Great job.
Have a great weekend.
Trudy

Hi Dear Teresat
Very artistic capture in B/W mode
Excellent dreamy lighting, great composition
(Sorry for my delay visiting your gallery as our internet speed is very slow these days...)
Best wishes, Alireza

Hello, Teresa -
This is a very special image - I love the way the slide comes down from the upper right and leads the eye swooping through the frame and right to the little girl. Her posture and the profile of her face are beautiful. Amazing range of tones with the very dark background and the brightly lit (but not OE) girl. Wonderful!

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  • suzy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 425 W: 38 N: 1262] (4338)
  • [2009-06-20 3:48]

I Look at this little girl and yes for a sec, a flash, memories and lots of memories started singing a nice song in my mind, how beautiful when a picture can bring you back in time.. adorable... B/W I dont think it can be any better, the right choice indeed, the perfect moment, that sweet glance, the beginning of an adventure, and a lot to say and dream and all that you captured my dear Teresa in one shot, in a great superb sweet presentation... and you just made me smile:)

thank you and have a great day.... Um grande abraço
gitana

Bom dia Teresa,

Reflexões (e incompreensões) de uma menina sobre a "realidade" da vida adulta, ou reflexões de uma mulher (você) a respeito dos sonhos (tantos!) da própria infância.

Belíssimo trabalho!

Obrigado,
Sergio

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2726 W: 412 N: 2985] (32789)
  • [2009-06-20 4:20]

hi dear Teresat...
cristina or need a friend
very lonely
a good
greetings

Good morning Teresa,
A fine portrait. The diagonal created by the slide is attractive, and the young girl sitting at the edge looks pensive with a hint of smile. The b&w rendition is effective as there is good contrast and tone. Best regards...
Danilo

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2009-06-20 8:13]

Hello Teresat,
A marvelous Portrait of perfect light and detail, on absolutely amazing atmosphere.
Have a good weekend.
Janusz

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  • tatara Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 64 N: 401] (3779)
  • [2009-06-20 14:24]

Hi Teresa
What a beautiful scenery which is composed very well and beautifully presented.
Excellent composition.
Good work
regards
JozefK

Ciao Teresat!

I'm home only temporarily, becuse I'm spending my holidays on board of my sailing boat... so I checked my account by chance...
Christina Rossetti was one of my favourite poet, If I don't remember wrong one of her poem was:
"In winter I get up at night
and dress by yellow candle light.
In summer, quite the other way
I have to go to bed by day.
....
Do you know it?
your photo is so cute!
I love that little girl and her look. The strong contrast white/black makes it so emotional.
Have a wonderful summer vacation,
I hope to find you again in October (or mabe earlier...)
Un abbraccio!
Donato

Hi Teresat,
I don't like to see a child in a b/w environment. Is a bit negative, while children are positive.
Indeed a lot of mood in this photo. Great note with it.
TFS.
Joop!

Hermoso poema, gran blanco y negro. Nostalgia y fotografia van de la mano. :)

Sweet and cute shot. Good B&W conversion.

Boa noite Teresa,
Uma foto assim torna tudo menos pesado.
Deus te abençoe.
Raimundo

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4237 W: 414 N: 6691] (42201)
  • [2009-06-23 3:06]

Ola Teresat

Superb contrast, tonal range & graphism, in this outstanding b&w image, with good sharpness & composition. Parabens!

Hi Teresat.
A lovely black and white composition,
great caught of view and good contrast in this picture. Excellent portrait and pose..
very well taken and done.
compliments
Michel bonne journée

one of my must see city in the future.. this is one of my top 5 places to visit in the world..

beautiful intense black and white shot, Teresa.. another lovely work.. the little girl have faraway look in her expression.. :) at 14 i was not into poem yet but quote.. i was so engrossed in sports.. i started to became the top athlete in school.. someone approached my dad asking my hand in marriage when i was 14 hehe.. it was funny time.. of course my dad said no.. but most of all i have a wonderful memories of my childhood but i sure remember my 14 :)

love your poem always go together with your work.. well done..

regards, terry

Ciao Teresa, splendid B&W with lovely little girl, beautiful composition with fantastic light, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hi Teresa,
Beautiful artwork expressing innocence... Childhood is always good to remember on... Old friends, playful summers. This moment was captured very well and I'm sure anyone who looks at this image will remember the best moments of her/his childhood. TFS!
Best wishes,
Kristof

Hi Teresat...nice shot...very good range of tones and details...nice work.

Roger

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 877 W: 64 N: 1973] (13584)
  • [2009-06-25 7:19]

Hi Teresat,
What a fine post-- memories of a child. This is really nicely composed, great expression and timing and yes- brings us back just a few years. Excellent choice for B&W-- Thanks, Julie

Bom dia Teresat, A fine nostalgic shot from a wonderful POV with fine composition.
TFS and cheers,
Bayram

Nice photo dear Teresat.
Nice atmosphere and note.

Grande abraço,
A.

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 278 W: 20 N: 703] (3379)
  • [2009-06-26 4:35]

Hi Teresat,

Interesting portrait, B&W created somehow a different mood.
The pinpoint lighting of the girl draws the viewer easily
on the subject. Well balanced composition, very nice mood and lighting.

TFS
Ramon

Hello Teresat, this picture is a lovely reminder of childhood, when life was simple and uncomplicated.
You have created a lovely mood by using b/w.
A lovely choice of poem too,quite poignant.
Tfs, regards Jean.

Very moody picture, Teresat.
Best regards from Jan

A linha de força emprestada pelo escorrega aponta e dirige o nosso olhar para aquele que é o motivo principal da composição. A luz sublinha de igual modo este elemento principal!
Acho que está fenomenal e respira poesia!
Agora vem a parte difícil porque estou com dificuldade em expressar-me de forma coerente, mas cá vai…
O poema é belíssimo, mas… (não é uma critica… é um desabafo!) estou confuso porque não me consigo descolar do princípio de que a candura de uma criança se projecta sempre no futuro!
Saudações
António

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 6 N: 1920] (10151)
  • [2009-06-27 10:25]

Bom Dia Teresa,
A marvelous illustration in the picture of the small lady-wonderfully composition with good B& W and light.
Regards.
Eva

Hello Teresat,

Very beautiful capture, great atmosphere. Your photo give me a nostalgic feeling for my childhood. TFS
Regards,
Sorina

Ola Teresa
adoro esta foto.
Um olhar fantastico e um precioso enquadramento
Parabens
Sergio

Hello Teresat,
Great captured and artistic shot.
very beautiful composition and BW colours.
TFS.Greetings
H.Ayhan

Ciao Teresa. Magnificent poetic BW with spectacular light. Eh si. Mamma mia che bella!

Roberto

Hii, excellent shot.

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 0 N: 957] (4608)
  • [2009-07-01 19:29]

Hi Teresat,
you have lots of sweet remembrance. You depict it well in your writing and the impact is more in your photo. Expecially BW to strengthen the reminiscence.
Nice composition and a good visual presentation.

regards,
Foozi

Ola Teresat! Interesting idea. Original black and white art work. Good shot. Well done! Saude!

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  • ChuFer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 139 W: 15 N: 0] (2352)
  • [2009-07-03 13:47]

Personalísima forma de captar momentos y de su tratamiento con la luz...se me escapa...saludos

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19908)
  • [2009-07-07 11:17]

Hi Teresa,
Very happy to be here with you after a month of absence!
What I see is a "vrai bonheur"!
The subject and the composition are timeless and your B&W conversion adds a lot of conotative memories experiments. Each child has had in his childhood a moment of loneliness for printed some interesting meetings or experiements in his thoughts.
I like much the beautiful mouvement you give with the use of the seesaw line.
My compliments! Annie

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4764] (21695)
  • [2009-07-11 3:04]

Hi Teresat...

It's really a beautiful shot and lovely portrait in B&W...
Nice natural posse and smile.
Congrats my dear TL friend,
George

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1690 W: 124 N: 1438] (20400)
  • [2009-09-17 1:12]

Ciao Teresat,
beautiful W&B shot with emotional note.Well presented.TFS.Necla.

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  • subs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 252 W: 0 N: 222] (2080)
  • [2009-10-06 7:26]

Hi Teresat,
A very poetic and charming composition. The b/w gives it an old world feel.
Rgds
Subashini

hi teresat..
this photo is a jewel in black and white..
good work

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