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Red Women


Red Women
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Copyright: Burak Erek (berek) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 690 W: 60 N: 50] (333)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-26
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-10-20 11:05
Viewed: 93
Points: 1
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Interesting photo.

A Photographer's Note would be nice.

Rew

Greetings Burak,
A beatiful capture of this charming lady & her gorgeous dress.
I do find however that the bus & its advetisement,that huge face, really distracts me from your main subject. I think if you cropped out the face on the bus,made a tighter crop it would bring the beauty of your subject to the viewers eye. I did a WS converting the bus to B&W & blurred that part slightly, to see if it would make your main subject more vibrant. Let me know what you think,please.
Cheers Ron

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