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summer in the city


summer in the city
Photo Information
Copyright: dorte sandorff (dorte_s_t) (1)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-06-10
Categories: Decisive Moment
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/640 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-06-12 12:16
Viewed: 632
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This little girl remembers the thrill of the chute , and is determined to go on her own !
" I'm a big girl " !
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Then again, you haven't called on anyone else and thereby lies the problem. Try visiting other postings and leaving a simple comment. You will be surprised how many people visit you as a result, I would hope.
I found this in the Uncritiqued file and wondered why. There are few reasons - one covered above.
Another is all down to presentation and you should always consider cropping for visual power, removing any distractions from the core subject.
I will attach a workshop for you that will outline some very simple edits and, hopefully, will show a more powerful image? Do take a look?
Welcome to the harsh world of TL ;)

Subject is high in cuteness factor and is VERY colourful and, importantly, is sharp. Let's see if I can do something with it ...

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