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Sparkling Lips


Sparkling Lips
Photo Information
Copyright: Flemming Kroll (Modeltypes-dk) (4)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-05-05
Categories: Experimental
Camera: Canon EOS 10D, Sigma 24-70 f/2.8, Digital
Exposure: f/11, 1/125 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-05-07 23:31
Viewed: 2263
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I put vasaline on the models lips an glass pearls thereafter. The blur effect is from Photoshop. Also the sparks on the lips.
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To gadinga: Thank you for your comment.Modeltypes-dk 1 05-08 17:01
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  • gadinga Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 37 W: 3 N: 37] (159)
  • [2004-05-08 9:45]
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Interesting idea with the beads. I do think that your softening idea is a bit too extreme. You totally lost the edge lines of the nose and the chin. I think this effect could be nice on cheeks or a forehead but you may have overdone it.

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2004-05-17 5:05]

It would be intresting to see this photo without the pearls as well Flemming because i think you have managed very well with the composition and light. I think i would have liked to remove part of the softening from the eye lashes, eye brows and her hair to keep more structure there. The idea with the pearls is difrent and it shows creativity. keep it up.

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