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Fun in rain


Fun in rain
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Copyright: Jan Weh (wolle) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 82 W: 13 N: 44] (561)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-12
Categories: Decisive Moment
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-01-07 19:05
Viewed: 1068
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My first posting on TL, hope, sbdy'll enjoy ;-)

Sønderborg beach, a slightly rainy day, strolling around... This couple obvoiusly had some fun fooling around, laughing and doing the catwalk. After watching them for some time, they didn't spent more attention on me and the camera. I've had the time composing and taking the shot in the moment, the girl was to be seen in one line to her friend. The emptyness of the sky's used to represent their easyness, even in bad weather.
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Welcome! Great composition on this shot. It looks very well thought out. I especially like your use of large f-stop to blur the man she is walking towards. The slight tilting of the frame is a nice touch also! It adds to the feeling of rough weather. Cool reflections on the boardwalk too. Nice work! :)

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  • zoe Silver Star Critiquer [C: 41 W: 0 N: 7] (168)
  • [2005-01-07 21:01]

I mainly like the reflections and the cold tones of this picture. Fits the bad weather and the agitated sea. Very good shot, congrats. And black goes well on the border too.

Good point of veiew. It seems like a pretty windy day and isn't the pier awful close to the water? Good work and welcome.

Welcome to TL Jan. A very appealing composition, calling for our imagination and a million stories that seem to hide behind the scene. I like the way they are facing one another, symbol of arrivals and departures. I wish your photograph was a bit sharper though, but that's a minor detail.

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  • yttt Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 270 W: 10 N: 3] (2114)
  • [2005-01-08 4:24]

colors and facture are great, i like too this feeling in this pic

Welcome Jan. Great composition for your first post !
I like your enframing, the light, the reflection. There is a dynamism (position of girl's leg) ...
Photo full of emotions !!
I want to see your other post !!
Hugues

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-01-08 13:30]

Ils promènent leurs corps entre ciel et mer ... joli coup d'oeil et bienvenue sur TL.

welcone to TL, this photo is full of natural energi, wind , wather. nice compozition, litle too bright becouse no sky.

You got a glimpse of the spirit of the Denmark that I lived. Mange Tak.

Guido

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  • fox- Gold Star Critiquer [C: 73 W: 8 N: 6] (537)
  • [2005-08-21 15:31]

What a picture! perfect!

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  • Lisar Gold Star Critiquer [C: 319 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-08-21 15:34]

Jan, your first posting here and is a winner! Everything here is in almost ideal proprotion - colors, distribution of figures, contrasts.

Keep posting these beauties.

Welcome to TL!

i still wonder why i didn't discover THIS untin now.

the combination of the foam, the sea and the catwalk are beautiful; i like the diffusity.

Also great picture!
looks unreal!
nice shot

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2005-09-25 18:25]

Beautiful ...
5*****!
congratulations
Luci

well done.
Mitra

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  • jafsc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 53 N: 88] (4621)
  • [2005-11-09 3:48]

Magnifique photo! J'aime l'atmosphère de retrouvaille malgré les éléments défavorables:la pluie et le vent. Très belle composition.Merci Jan du partage.
José

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